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We The People
The stench, stinging, burning
the nostrils, you can't escape
it, it fills the air like thick fog
filling what's left of our lungs
frying us from the inside out
We are all dead here, it was
just a matter of time, some
of us knew it, for those that
didn't suffocated on their
own rotten flesh
It's no longer a world of blue
skys and puffy clouds, when
you greeted your neighbor with
a big smile and how's your
kids, it's a zombie eat people
world, soon to be zombie eat
zombie nation
Ripping the rotten flesh from
festering carcasses, we will
become living corpses, mangled
and somewhat bereft, the same
as we were when we looked
normal
the nostrils, you can't escape
it, it fills the air like thick fog
filling what's left of our lungs
frying us from the inside out
We are all dead here, it was
just a matter of time, some
of us knew it, for those that
didn't suffocated on their
own rotten flesh
It's no longer a world of blue
skys and puffy clouds, when
you greeted your neighbor with
a big smile and how's your
kids, it's a zombie eat people
world, soon to be zombie eat
zombie nation
Ripping the rotten flesh from
festering carcasses, we will
become living corpses, mangled
and somewhat bereft, the same
as we were when we looked
normal
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Re: We The People
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 4:05pm
God damn-it I'm trying to eat my breakfast here :) Wow! you paint a horrific scene with this one.Once again your variety amazes me. BTW you'd be hot as a zombie just, you know, zombie hot ;)
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re: Re: We The People
13th Jun 2013 4:25pm
HEHEE....So sorry lerdgoin!What are or were you eating?Eggs, sausage, bacon....brains!?? :-) I couldn't resist, don't hate me!
Zombie hotness ...I love it, thank you ;)))
And thanks for reading my stuff that's not about sex! ;)
Zombie hotness ...I love it, thank you ;)))
And thanks for reading my stuff that's not about sex! ;)
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 4:30pm
Raisin Bran :) Oh with brains on toast. I tried an experiment. I marked one of my not sexual pieces erotic and the number of readers shot up considerably :) Everyone of us is multifaceted...I like to experience the whole person
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13th Jun 2013 4:37pm
Raisin brains huh!!!?My favorite cereal!
True we all have different talents..;))
True we all have different talents..;))
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13th Jun 2013 5:52pm
Badass poem Tommie! I like zombie stuff too, that apocalyptic and savage fall of society stuff is interesting to me. This makes me want to go watch 28 Days Later + 28 Weeks Later..
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13th Jun 2013 6:00pm
Thank you DF...in my house if anything is on that has to do with zombies..nobody talks, that's the rule...lol..we love it!!
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:40am
You did this write well tl...
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