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So Hard, but...
Baby keep me so hot, I stay hard
yet, she said she love me when I'm soft...
so sorta speakin in tongues of love
liquids unite, pleasures like heaven above
floatin' about on pillows of passion
sunk in deep, I'm poundin hot flesh again...
sucklin' her thick juicy clit, mmmmm
such bliss I grin drownin, sinkin'
in joy our minds get lost
baby gotta know to her pussy I'm the boss
sorry my apologies to you Mr cockhead
but she said, she'll happily always suck me off
drainin' me empty simply becuz,
she love me when I'm soft...
yet, she said she love me when I'm soft...
so sorta speakin in tongues of love
liquids unite, pleasures like heaven above
floatin' about on pillows of passion
sunk in deep, I'm poundin hot flesh again...
sucklin' her thick juicy clit, mmmmm
such bliss I grin drownin, sinkin'
in joy our minds get lost
baby gotta know to her pussy I'm the boss
sorry my apologies to you Mr cockhead
but she said, she'll happily always suck me off
drainin' me empty simply becuz,
she love me when I'm soft...
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Re: So Hard, but...
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 5:18am
Oh, damn! So hot! Nice write, cher!
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13th Jun 2013 5:30am
Lol yea I felt like u might be cold with that outfit on soooooo lol
Thank you precious kitten I truly appreciate u :)
Thank you precious kitten I truly appreciate u :)
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13th Jun 2013 5:20am
Wait! What's today's date again?!
My mind just went blank! Over-heated memory bank! WHEW!
My mind just went blank! Over-heated memory bank! WHEW!
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13th Jun 2013 5:49am
Lmao it's Thursday, June 13th but hey if that
doesn't help I have a bucket of ice lol
Thank u sweetie for the funny n great comment :)
doesn't help I have a bucket of ice lol
Thank u sweetie for the funny n great comment :)
Re: So Hard, but...
13th Jun 2013 7:20am
Thank goodness I can blame the rain for gettin wet lolz steamy write babez!
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re: Re: So Hard, but...
13th Jun 2013 11:00am
aaaaawwww lol hope the 'shower' didnt ruin your clothing lol
Thank you my sweet lady, appreciate you much! :)
Thank you my sweet lady, appreciate you much! :)
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13th Jun 2013 8:56am
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13th Jun 2013 11:02am
Can you see me thru the steam trying to give you a hi five?
lol thank sweetie, always grateful for your visits n support :)
lol thank sweetie, always grateful for your visits n support :)
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13th Jun 2013 12:57pm
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14th Jun 2013 4:47am
Lmao!! That's funny as hell dude lol really?? then I wish I could bottle this 'popularity' may e I can make some cash n become wealthy lol anyways, thank u my friend, appreciate u much :)
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 2:18am
haha....sick bro...poetically sick you are...that's why I'm a fan..hahaa..I never thought 'soft' for a man could be considered a good thing..i stand corrected..thank you for the lesson...
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re: Re: So Hard, but...
14th Jun 2013 5:02am
Lmao yea bro I gotta admit I laughed at my damn semi for the
Implication, then realized u know what?? What man would argue bout being 'soft' under those conditions!? lol
Truly, appreciate u bro! Much love to you kid :)
Implication, then realized u know what?? What man would argue bout being 'soft' under those conditions!? lol
Truly, appreciate u bro! Much love to you kid :)
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21st Jun 2013 1:25am
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21st Jun 2013 3:53am
Aaaawwww well I'm deeply honored n flattered! thank u n I can't stop i breathe it :)