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Hush Now (edited by Kasupuu)
Hasn't enough been said
time for you to be fed
sucking and licking in bed
Honey drops off my head
Devouring the pleasure stick
liking that it is thick
I do enjoy every flick
you do know how to bless my dick
Wasn't sure how much time before
we knocked down that other door
and journey to the sexual core
so intense creating legend and lore
A glove I broke out but you said "raw"
assured that a disease wasn't my flaw
with that at the rest of the outfit I did claw
oh yes what hot intercourse we saw...
time for you to be fed
sucking and licking in bed
Honey drops off my head
Devouring the pleasure stick
liking that it is thick
I do enjoy every flick
you do know how to bless my dick
Wasn't sure how much time before
we knocked down that other door
and journey to the sexual core
so intense creating legend and lore
A glove I broke out but you said "raw"
assured that a disease wasn't my flaw
with that at the rest of the outfit I did claw
oh yes what hot intercourse we saw...
Published 10th Jun 2013
| Edited 3rd Jul 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
10th Jun 2013 8:16pm
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 8:35pm
nicely conveys the-less talk more action feeling and gets right to it..nicely done, Mr.jazz...good work!!
11th Jun 2013 6:35am
Thanks; in concert with the theme of the poem it was the most spontaneous thing I have come up with.
Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 10:54pm
kudos to both of you...yes
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 6:43am
Can't think of a better way to hush someone up, lol. You did great!
11th Jun 2013 7:45am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
11th Jun 2013 6:48am
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11th Jun 2013 7:46am
11th Jun 2013 4:54pm
Nice rhyming while (fucking) to the beat!
Congratulations to both of you. You're a good tandem, hmmmm...you guys rock!
Congratulations to both of you. You're a good tandem, hmmmm...you guys rock!
12th Jun 2013 11:33pm
Thank you Vic. Kasupuu is kind enough to give it enough polish so that I actually have the courage to publish.
11th Jun 2013 6:45pm
12th Jun 2013 11:35pm
