deepundergroundpoetry.com
Eat
If Adam was
The first
SON
Eve was
The First
LADY
That means Eve
Held the Key
To Adams
Life
In her being
Contained
Powerful
Atoms
She already felt
This source
In her being
Had her feeling
So magically
No way in hell
She couldn't share
This with her Mate
Adam scared
& curious
Decided
For her
I will die
Not
Literally
But every
Egotistical thought in me
He tasted what His lover
Brought to Him
He closed
His eyes
And opened Them
And now he could
See all the lies
She looked at him
And realized
How much
He loved her
He chose to die
The knowledge was actually what saved His life
God bless your open mind Eve
The first
SON
Eve was
The First
LADY
That means Eve
Held the Key
To Adams
Life
In her being
Contained
Powerful
Atoms
She already felt
This source
In her being
Had her feeling
So magically
No way in hell
She couldn't share
This with her Mate
Adam scared
& curious
Decided
For her
I will die
Not
Literally
But every
Egotistical thought in me
He tasted what His lover
Brought to Him
He closed
His eyes
And opened Them
And now he could
See all the lies
She looked at him
And realized
How much
He loved her
He chose to die
The knowledge was actually what saved His life
God bless your open mind Eve
Published 10th Jun 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 2
comments 7
reads 920
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
10th Jun 2013 8:50pm
11th Jun 2013 7:43pm
12th Jun 2013 10:09pm
OMG! This is so cool! :) It is similar to my poem "The Greatest Story Every Written". Would mean a lot if you checked it out and gave me feedback.
14th Jun 2013 4:50pm
That was actually deep.
Most people read that story literally when it was metaphorically and esoterically.
Just like a lot of those stories.
But one has to have an intuitive mind to perceive.
Most people read that story literally when it was metaphorically and esoterically.
Just like a lot of those stories.
But one has to have an intuitive mind to perceive.
14th Jun 2013 4:55pm
Question.
If the first son and, "First Lady," wouldn't have shared themselves with each other then would procreation have been thru the process of, A-Sexuality?
That would seem boring.
I'd rather have the intimacy and desire of intercourse. Where two souls embrace, and become one.
If the first son and, "First Lady," wouldn't have shared themselves with each other then would procreation have been thru the process of, A-Sexuality?
That would seem boring.
I'd rather have the intimacy and desire of intercourse. Where two souls embrace, and become one.
17th Nov 2014 1:01am
17th Nov 2014 8:10pm
