Craving I

nice one Olive i like it

thanks charlie boy

I crave for ur compositions and I am now so addicted to them that I cannot help myself in this context to say that I am dying to read your longer compositions.

Raja few lines is as enough as a whole page! is the content that matters. thank you for comment

That's definitely true dear. Then I am supposed to read them repeatedly.

I think you should remove the brackets, as they don't change the piece at all, but other than that small quibble, this is the best of your short poems, Opheliac. Haunting and strange.

i wasn't sure whether do it or not that's why i wrote it in brackets. thanks jack :)

...Short

i've felt this one once or twice. well put