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10th Nov 2010 10:39am
10th Nov 2010 10:57am
10th Nov 2010 11:41am
with each and every simple touch of yours...I m getting desirous. Now the situation is that I crave for atleast one such sweet little post from you on the site. Publish more Ophie. Believe me you are a dormant volcano. With each of your action, the reader world will be blown away.
hehe anando i feel like you're spoiling me with your kind comments! thanks a million
10th Nov 2010 12:54pm
If this is how to spoil you...get spoiled and produce such kind of art forms.
10th Nov 2010 7:02pm
10th Nov 2010 8:13pm
Craving by name, craving by nature. Thr crowd cry for more, I'm satisfied with this for the moment, just please have more in the future. Don't just tease us and leave us y'hear.
Anonymous
10th Nov 2010 11:50pm
The two dots after "awaken" really emphasise that final word, giving it a warm, vulnerable eroticism.
11th Nov 2010 00:29am
11th Nov 2010 1:44am
11th Nov 2010 1:13pm
thanks everyone for their craving feedback!
there are more to come just hang on!
there are more to come just hang on!
18th Nov 2010 5:11pm
15th Dec 2010 10:35pm
A wonderful idea with so much juicy stuff to work with: sensual, erotic, but you've achieved nothing by stopping there; as someone commented already, yes,opheliac, you are such a tease--come on, bring it on, bring it out . . .
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It's amazing how a simple
touch can keep our airs
circulating thru us, giving
life. Such truth reigns
supremely.
touch can keep our airs
circulating thru us, giving
life. Such truth reigns
supremely.
12th Jul 2015 7:56pm
4th Feb 2016 2:47pm
I could never ever imagine
such a briefest poem
would draw birds and bees
to flower
and
spread nectar
1605 reads
sparks energy
that amongst the underworld of poets
lives
THE POET
silent albeit composedly magnificent
YOU
such a briefest poem
would draw birds and bees
to flower
and
spread nectar
1605 reads
sparks energy
that amongst the underworld of poets
lives
THE POET
silent albeit composedly magnificent
YOU
4th Feb 2016 6:18pm
5th Feb 2016 2:16am
how could u
we both composed similar ones
but in different veins
ur best
my own was just an effort
god bless uuuuu
can I say poet child
if you don't mind
we both composed similar ones
but in different veins
ur best
my own was just an effort
god bless uuuuu
can I say poet child
if you don't mind
12th May 2016 8:00pm
12th May 2016 9:45pm
14th May 2016 7:42am
but you are still
in the prime of youth
as I stand
on the last steps of life
one more step
may be ere!...
any guess
1657 have read yours
in the prime of youth
as I stand
on the last steps of life
one more step
may be ere!...
any guess
1657 have read yours
24th Aug 2017 1:53am
this is the firstest poem of urs I had read and knew you alone were the poetest 1888 reads my what a vast horizon orphy ma'am
9th Sep 2019 3:26am
9th Oct 2019 6:48pm
9th Oct 2019 9:36pm
Its been a blessing to hear
sweet words
from the world's bestest poetess
after long tymes
when will we reread such beautiful anthem
heaven knows
it has to be benign
if poetic love is DIVINE
Thanks ma'am
WE KNOW not each
SINCE AND AS yet
sweet words
from the world's bestest poetess
after long tymes
when will we reread such beautiful anthem
heaven knows
it has to be benign
if poetic love is DIVINE
Thanks ma'am
WE KNOW not each
SINCE AND AS yet
