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Suck, slurp, burp and sink
Suck, slurp, burp and sink
Merrily in the drink
Hysterically, fatally, futily, fruitily
Existence in the ink
Merrily in the drink
Hysterically, fatally, futily, fruitily
Existence in the ink
Published 9th Nov 2010
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2010 11:27am
An amusingly surreal take on the classic rhyme. I like how you play with the sounds language makes.
25th Nov 2010 7:50pm
Mine is but to make merry rhymes lost in the times, and change them estrange them. I always enjoy comments from you Jack.
