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monroe infection
she was a lady
i lived in that county
now i've obtained one
on my lip.
puss is yellow
gang-green is
well green
pilots
are guys who fly planes
seamen
are guys who operate boats.
maybe these words
are just death
in the form of infection
crawling to my brain
that would rather just shut down
then put up a fight
...
i lived in that county
now i've obtained one
on my lip.
puss is yellow
gang-green is
well green
pilots
are guys who fly planes
seamen
are guys who operate boats.
maybe these words
are just death
in the form of infection
crawling to my brain
that would rather just shut down
then put up a fight
...
Published 5th Jun 2013
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5th Jun 2013 9:39pm
maybe these words
are just death
in the form of infection
crawling to my brain
that would rather just shut down
then put up a fight
^^Especially liked this bit.
are just death
in the form of infection
crawling to my brain
that would rather just shut down
then put up a fight
^^Especially liked this bit.
6th Jun 2013 00:27am
Spacey,
decent random thoughts you have going on here, last six lines serve as a good adhesive for them.
I think maybe stick a couple of ellipses before the 'well on the 7th or after it, just to prolong the thought a little 'well ..green'
either way, good stuff, fair play, shine on
decent random thoughts you have going on here, last six lines serve as a good adhesive for them.
I think maybe stick a couple of ellipses before the 'well on the 7th or after it, just to prolong the thought a little 'well ..green'
either way, good stuff, fair play, shine on
6th Jun 2013 2:25am
according to nietzsche, the health of a thing is best determined by how much disease it can contract without dying. maybe your brain is like that- or maybe it is disinfectant and kills all those bad things dead.
6th Jun 2013 2:42pm
now
now,
no need t'shut down....uh, like They say: yr too young---
now, 'me', on-thee-udderhhand,
I wish eye didn't know who-I-was before I died (RIP 1952-c.2000/2002).....it mighta held for
dissemination of less
disinformation -
now,
no need t'shut down....uh, like They say: yr too young---
now, 'me', on-thee-udderhhand,
I wish eye didn't know who-I-was before I died (RIP 1952-c.2000/2002).....it mighta held for
dissemination of less
disinformation -
