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Treated Like a Queen
I came home from work, had a real bad day
I’m not sure how you knew
but, you went out of your way
to make things nice
with wine chilling on ice
candles were lit
and my favorite blues played softly in the background
the smell of vanilla hung in the air
you were waiting for me in a chair
I knew what to do
stripping slowly for you
straddling your lap
warm hands up my back
lips tracing my neck
hands fondle with touch
and fingers that glide
it’s you that I want
and I want you inside
bodies shiver and quake
feeling sated, feeling the wrath
as you carry me to the bath
you make my body sing
when you treat me like a queen
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Re: Treated Like a Queen
5th Jun 2013 3:42am
Sweet melody in ink! A romantic n sensual lil trip
that takes the reader where you are, very nice!
that takes the reader where you are, very nice!
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5th Jun 2013 5:15am
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 8:30am
Oh, I wish! Lovely fantasy of a poem.
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5th Jun 2013 10:23am
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5th Jun 2013 12:01pm
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 3:27pm
lunaz69,
Welcome home my queen. Glad you could cum! Great write for a fun and enjoyable evening ; )
tornado
Welcome home my queen. Glad you could cum! Great write for a fun and enjoyable evening ; )
tornado
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6th Jun 2013 12:12pm
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
7th Jun 2013 9:35am
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