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Blazing Passion
Feel my scorching ruby lips
Taste the sweetness on my tongue
Like burning lava flowing off a mountain
We linger on one another taking our time
My beauty has you mesmerized
Your compassion and strength keep me safe
Everything around us is silent and still
You orbit me in slow motion taking in my curves
I'm smoldering before you about to erupt
Waves of blistering heat crash inside of me
You gently seize me with blazing passion
Together we liquefy into oblivion
Taste the sweetness on my tongue
Like burning lava flowing off a mountain
We linger on one another taking our time
My beauty has you mesmerized
Your compassion and strength keep me safe
Everything around us is silent and still
You orbit me in slow motion taking in my curves
I'm smoldering before you about to erupt
Waves of blistering heat crash inside of me
You gently seize me with blazing passion
Together we liquefy into oblivion
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Re: Blazing Passion
4th Jun 2013 2:50pm
OMG...SSSOOOO HOTT!! l.o.l. so many hot lines
but that ending?? WOW that was lava!!l.o.l.
but that ending?? WOW that was lava!!l.o.l.
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 3:18pm
Very nice..has a leisurely feel of taking
time, but the passion is still there,
and the word description very tasteful,
yet teasing. Nice job:)
time, but the passion is still there,
and the word description very tasteful,
yet teasing. Nice job:)
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4th Jun 2013 3:30pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 3:22pm
this is moving tl....strider
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 5:04pm
tommielynn,
Slow and tense, like the tremmors before the eruption! HOT write!
tornado
Slow and tense, like the tremmors before the eruption! HOT write!
tornado
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4th Jun 2013 9:20pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 5:05pm
THAR SHE BLOWS!! So you manage to make a volcano hotter than ever ;) Lava might hurt just a little bit going in but you'll be warm for days ;)
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 11:45pm
The only way to travel :)
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