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Making Love
Hold me fiercely in your arms
let your warmth float into me
I feel your heart beat with mine
your body is firm your voice is soft
I surrender all of myself to you
With your hands rubbing my
tender thighs I feel your joy
Weaving into me smoothly
my mouth parts to lick my lips
and your mouth meets mine
Hunger flashes while I close my
eyes my senses are in overdrive
I chant your name with reverent
lips I don't hide how I worship you
Tangled like knots underneath
the sheet we can still collide
I immerse you into me over and
over with more urgency each time
My first orgasm rippled through
me sending me out of my head
By the second one I was sucking
on your bottom lip wanting to bite
I felt so many sensations as I was
spilling over your throbbing thickness
You brought me to that pleasure
several times but each time it's different
let your warmth float into me
I feel your heart beat with mine
your body is firm your voice is soft
I surrender all of myself to you
With your hands rubbing my
tender thighs I feel your joy
Weaving into me smoothly
my mouth parts to lick my lips
and your mouth meets mine
Hunger flashes while I close my
eyes my senses are in overdrive
I chant your name with reverent
lips I don't hide how I worship you
Tangled like knots underneath
the sheet we can still collide
I immerse you into me over and
over with more urgency each time
My first orgasm rippled through
me sending me out of my head
By the second one I was sucking
on your bottom lip wanting to bite
I felt so many sensations as I was
spilling over your throbbing thickness
You brought me to that pleasure
several times but each time it's different
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Re: Making Love
4th Jun 2013 4:38am
Mmmmmmmm,very sensual and sexy,so much detail,and multiple oragsm,you spilling over his throbbing cock,love it!
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4th Jun 2013 1:18pm
Re: Making Love
4th Jun 2013 5:08am
Hott damn lady, whew! lol
you make my knees buckle just thinking bout
that heat session u described lol mmmmmm now I'm hungry as hell lol
you make my knees buckle just thinking bout
that heat session u described lol mmmmmm now I'm hungry as hell lol
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4th Jun 2013 1:19pm
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4th Jun 2013 5:29am
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Re: Making Love
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2013 1:27pm
4th Jun 2013 6:03am
"I'll have what she's having" thrice please. I think, I mean I'd have to check the rules, but your only entitled to a total of 340 orgasms a year (341 on leap year) so you might have to start faking some ;)
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4th Jun 2013 1:21pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 1:30pm
Them's the rules, sorry y'all
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4th Jun 2013 5:11pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 10:37am
You flow like the Everready bunny tl
ha ha...strider
ha ha...strider
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re: Re: Making Love
4th Jun 2013 1:24pm
Energizer bunny...it keeps going, and going and going and going!!You know it S...LMAO...
Thank you ;)))
Thank you ;)))
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 5:19pm
tommie,
Vive la différence!!! Hot Hungry Horny write! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Vive la différence!!! Hot Hungry Horny write! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Making Love
4th Jun 2013 10:42pm
Hot passionate write and read. Favourite verse the last - the climax of the poem.
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5th Jun 2013 00:36am