Brothers

The Id. Yes. Good read, Soul.

:))) Thank You Dear Grace!!!

By presenting the contrast of light and dark you give a difference that all readers can relate to. "Everything is numb
acting", stands out as a most remarkable line.

Thank You Jazz:) this was one of those I couldn't shape what I saw...the two sections were to be side by side...but when writing such...it mingles the words together once You hit preview...anything written offset...it has to be done "photo"-style...which our fine friends of two use the sacred secrets of often...I shall learn this magic one day:)

Wow thanks for education about this site and the form of the poem!

I love the uniqueness of You, seeping from your pen! ;)

Love For You too Dear Rain, Your heart and soul flows in Your ink to be sure!!!
Thank You My Friend!!!

Well done soul, Yin and Yang?

Yes indeed Carpe thank You Sir!!!
both are both

I often wonder about the depths of darkness behind the light, fathomless.

Great pondering write Soul.

Indeed light and dark have infinite reach!!!
Thank You Dear Magdalena!!!

A poem that describes the anticipating in the backgrounds, I see before me two people who try to connect but without words, in the numbness all exsists (makes me think of bhudism too in a way)
Great write,Soul!

Indeed tried presenting as brothers but yes thoughts to bhudism ...i can mull the finite details for way too much lengths at time. Thank You Dear Queen!!!

Duality told well soul...

I thank You Sir!!!

Much enjoyed, your skill is shown in
every poem, I like the idea of the contrast
in this one :)

Well written, poet!

Awww glad You liked it :) (the painting is actually a brother and sister ;) Thank You-too kind Dear Poetess!!!