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If only I could
If I could take your pain
and run far away with it,
tie it to a big ugly rock
and throw it deep into the ocean,
watch it sink to the bottom
then turn and run back home.
Swing open the front door,
see you smile again
and hear you say
everything's ok.
If I could only take your pain.
and run far away with it,
tie it to a big ugly rock
and throw it deep into the ocean,
watch it sink to the bottom
then turn and run back home.
Swing open the front door,
see you smile again
and hear you say
everything's ok.
If I could only take your pain.
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Re: If only I could
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 11:02pm
I truly love this poem!
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Re: If only I could
4th Jun 2013 8:42pm
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Re: If only I could
Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 00:22am
A very compassionate poem....
I really liked it
Peace
Kitty
I really liked it
Peace
Kitty
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