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Do you remember how to dance?
Disarmed you
with a smile
found a way
past your
social camouflage
I knew your thorny
defense, was exactly that
Painful memories from past
jailers, harsh treatment
of your beauty
Taken for granted
sweet flower
withdrawn
from the sun
My smile
fully deprecating
yet it worked
I must confess
it's getting dark
now, this is all
a facade
I layer my armor
wear my scars
like a badge
The voodoo woman
she holds
my still beating heart
They call me
the wild rose
she smiled
held my hand
turned to me
Do you remember
how to dance
blue eyes?
with a smile
found a way
past your
social camouflage
I knew your thorny
defense, was exactly that
Painful memories from past
jailers, harsh treatment
of your beauty
Taken for granted
sweet flower
withdrawn
from the sun
My smile
fully deprecating
yet it worked
I must confess
it's getting dark
now, this is all
a facade
I layer my armor
wear my scars
like a badge
The voodoo woman
she holds
my still beating heart
They call me
the wild rose
she smiled
held my hand
turned to me
Do you remember
how to dance
blue eyes?
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Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 5:49am
re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:20pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 8:23am
sad..never forget how to dance...even if it's only a sway..lovely work, carpe :-)
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re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:21pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:08am
I was a dancer on stage in the theater when younger and always loved to dance.
A wonderful write Carpe.
A wonderful write Carpe.
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re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:22pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:35am
Let's all remember to dance, even when no ones watching. Beautiful write, Carpe.
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re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:24pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 10:14am
Bravo write noctem....strider
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re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:24pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 5:23pm
re: Re: Do you remember how to dance?
3rd Jun 2013 9:26pm
Re: Do you remember how to dance?
22nd Jun 2013 1:20am
thank you for reminding me to dance as if life was my stage.. great inking Carpe.. peace Crim
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