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Re: Broken
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 2:08am
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Re: Broken
3rd Jun 2013 1:44pm
well-said
none-of-us
'keeps'
any such thing ---yet
near-none of us
can 'look at' how
'our cling' perpetuates
all our pain
-or not-
eye could be wrong, right?
none-of-us
'keeps'
any such thing ---yet
near-none of us
can 'look at' how
'our cling' perpetuates
all our pain
-or not-
eye could be wrong, right?
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
4th Jun 2013 9:58am
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Re: Broken
6th Jun 2013 5:32am