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There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
It's hot,
very hot,
cruising
down I-88
the windows down
I'm riding shotgun
talking to whoever
the fuck is listening
sometimes belting
out a song or two
in mid conversation
I get a happy smile
from the passengers
in the back seat, they
know I'm crazy, that's
why they like me
I smile back and give
them the old cross
eyed look with my
tongue sticking out
to the side
I smack the driver
in the face with my
strawberry lips and he
shakes his head and grins
My arm out the window
making waves like a dolphin
jumping out of the water,
I just like the cool wind
at 70 miles per hour
Looking up to the sky
I see the coolest thing,
cumulus clouds puffed
out across the powder
blue sky, one took the shape
of a unicorn right through
my rainbow, I point and
shout for the overheated
riders to take a look, they
didn't see it
Must have been
the shrooms
very hot,
cruising
down I-88
the windows down
I'm riding shotgun
talking to whoever
the fuck is listening
sometimes belting
out a song or two
in mid conversation
I get a happy smile
from the passengers
in the back seat, they
know I'm crazy, that's
why they like me
I smile back and give
them the old cross
eyed look with my
tongue sticking out
to the side
I smack the driver
in the face with my
strawberry lips and he
shakes his head and grins
My arm out the window
making waves like a dolphin
jumping out of the water,
I just like the cool wind
at 70 miles per hour
Looking up to the sky
I see the coolest thing,
cumulus clouds puffed
out across the powder
blue sky, one took the shape
of a unicorn right through
my rainbow, I point and
shout for the overheated
riders to take a look, they
didn't see it
Must have been
the shrooms
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Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 6:51pm
Wow... This was some kinda magical...TRIP
must be the mastery of the poetess ! :)
must be the mastery of the poetess ! :)
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re: Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 7:35pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 7:00pm
re: Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 7:36pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
Anonymous
31st May 2013 7:20pm
nice write and ending to your trippy poem
strider
strider
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re: Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 7:37pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
Anonymous
31st May 2013 9:19pm
tommie,
Now that's a road trip! Very cool!!! Enjoyed the ride ; )
tornado
Now that's a road trip! Very cool!!! Enjoyed the ride ; )
tornado
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re: Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 9:22pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 9:48pm
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31st May 2013 9:55pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
31st May 2013 9:58pm
Re: There's A Cloud In My
31st May 2013 11:08pm
Trips in more than one sense! Though in real life I wouldn't want to be on a bus with a high driver.
Had to drastically shorten subject title to be able to post this.
Had to drastically shorten subject title to be able to post this.
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re: Re: There's A Cloud In My
31st May 2013 11:31pm
I wouldn't either SS...I was coming back from grocery
shopping today and seen a cloud with a rainbow in it,
and came up with the poem!Nobody was high!
thanks for reading :)
shopping today and seen a cloud with a rainbow in it,
and came up with the poem!Nobody was high!
thanks for reading :)
Re: There's A Cloud In My Rainbow And It Looks Like A Unicorn
1st Jun 2013 1:30am
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1st Jun 2013 1:40am