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Sand and Stone
we are the opposites that attract
letting the best in each shine
I am ubiquitous like the sand
folding around you as a cushion
against the waves of power
you are the stone sturdy in substance
through strength you carry
the world on your own
but I am the sand that softly
folds into your touch
we are a pulse that beats as one
for I am the sand
and you are stone
letting the best in each shine
I am ubiquitous like the sand
folding around you as a cushion
against the waves of power
you are the stone sturdy in substance
through strength you carry
the world on your own
but I am the sand that softly
folds into your touch
we are a pulse that beats as one
for I am the sand
and you are stone
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Re: Sand and Stone
Anonymous
29th May 2013 3:48pm
Beautiful!!!! True emotion of steadiness of difference holding each other together. :)
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29th May 2013 4:37pm
A string of metaphors superbly moulded to make an allegory. Sign of a true poet.
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Re: Sand and Stone
Anonymous
- Edited 31st May 2013 00:50am
29th May 2013 10:36pm
Luna this a wonderful depiction of the symbiosis that can occur in a loving partnership that, out of mutual respect, recognizes and celebrates each lovers differences. and yet also recognizes shared qualities that there is the strength of rock in every grain of sand and the potential for softness in every rock....I know blah blah blah just put it in a poem Lerd ;)
Well done btw
Well done btw
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
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Re: Sand and Stone
2nd Jun 2013 8:40pm
Strong write, that sings of love,
rushing in and out as the tide.
I love the title.
I love the poem.
rushing in and out as the tide.
I love the title.
I love the poem.
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