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Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Drifting along banks
on tips of baccano
where cues flared
signaling the end
meant over there
not middle of somewhere.
chemical lawns
gleaming freedom
littered with west Virginia
tumbleweeds spill
with their wind
on downhill slide
bringing holiday stay
to a forest camp
birds scream
and a squirrel sighs
looking around to find
where the deer hide
they know best
bedding down near
the streams
where land is cut a slice
of the American dream
forking the hills and valley
betwixt long gone fields
plush Groves shiver
dangling on the edge of tine
a stones throw near the river
down below Glen, yeah
you know him
he's the one putting oil
on the last dirt road
helping keep the dust down
construction trucks
hauling in dirt, taking
leavings of trees
if acres are just...
only a couple hundred
years old, their bulldozed to sleep
log out money and fillet the rest
build another community
quarter acre spots
feed me your din
help the people buy
chemical dawn for each
and everyone, enjoying holiday
as I look uphill and see the storm
bringing rains to wash
down
*there's land under that river -I heard someone say
on tips of baccano
where cues flared
signaling the end
meant over there
not middle of somewhere.
chemical lawns
gleaming freedom
littered with west Virginia
tumbleweeds spill
with their wind
on downhill slide
bringing holiday stay
to a forest camp
birds scream
and a squirrel sighs
looking around to find
where the deer hide
they know best
bedding down near
the streams
where land is cut a slice
of the American dream
forking the hills and valley
betwixt long gone fields
plush Groves shiver
dangling on the edge of tine
a stones throw near the river
down below Glen, yeah
you know him
he's the one putting oil
on the last dirt road
helping keep the dust down
construction trucks
hauling in dirt, taking
leavings of trees
if acres are just...
only a couple hundred
years old, their bulldozed to sleep
log out money and fillet the rest
build another community
quarter acre spots
feed me your din
help the people buy
chemical dawn for each
and everyone, enjoying holiday
as I look uphill and see the storm
bringing rains to wash
down
*there's land under that river -I heard someone say
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Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Anonymous
27th May 2013 10:33pm
great imagery with an air of sadness soul....enjoyed
strider
strider
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re: Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
27th May 2013 10:37pm
Indeed it disappears quickly...sadness and remembrance is more for You today kind Sir but the Muse would not let me pen the subject befitting the fine folk, appreciate the read Strider!!!
Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
27th May 2013 10:37pm
Isn't that the way it is? Money talks and BS... well you know the rest, the great and powerful capitalist mentality. It is sad.
Red
Red
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re: Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
27th May 2013 10:56pm
indeed Dear Red, much lost here in the name of greed...the original owners were such kind men who loved their land...I knew them well...it spreads everywhere so fast, as does all horrors...Thank You for the kind words:)
Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Money does not only talk, it roars at time and heaven helps you if you stand on its way. Seen it here too. Good read Soul.
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re: Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
28th May 2013 00:16am
So sad it tis...the once owners were scared of this very thing...greedy lineage...Thank You for reading me:)
Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Anonymous
28th May 2013 1:50am
They paved paradise and put up a parking lot.
True words, soul, and very well written.
True words, soul, and very well written.
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re: Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
28th May 2013 2:28am
Thank You Petit, Greatly appreciate Your visit and kind words!!!
You humble me by adding to Your RL-Grateful!!!
You humble me by adding to Your RL-Grateful!!!
Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Anonymous
28th May 2013 8:29am
Much enjoyed this poem by you, Soul!
Nature and man do not go hand in hand....
The deers have gone almost from our forests here since its so much cutting down of trees....
Now the local factory has bought up some land to expand their buildings already robbed some people of their view
thanks for sharing!
Nature and man do not go hand in hand....
The deers have gone almost from our forests here since its so much cutting down of trees....
Now the local factory has bought up some land to expand their buildings already robbed some people of their view
thanks for sharing!
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re: Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
28th May 2013 4:27pm
Sad days it is for mother nature, many DO know how to live better with the earth, yet always more keep on with their destuctive and thoughtless ways...Big money will always win.
Sorry for the blight upon Your nature.
thank You for the read and kind comment!!!
Sorry for the blight upon Your nature.
thank You for the read and kind comment!!!
Re: Bambi and Her creatures hide in my backyard
Anonymous
28th May 2013 9:21am
paints a sad but real picture of modern reality..sad but great work, soula :-)
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