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Free Fall
Free fall…
Free fall…
Like our joyride in Orlando-
When you closed your eyes,
And held your hands in mine,
And completely relied upon me,
And we kissed the ground with no harm,
And started rising again.
Free fall…
Free fall…
Like we are descending from the heaven-
In one parachute umbrella,
And you hold me tight,
And completely rely upon me,
And kiss my lips with yours,
And calm down again.
Don’t look down!
We will land somehow,
Don’t worry about the disaster.
Free fall is a nightmare that may knock your mind and awake you from your sleep when you are enjoying the best moments of your life. Its about a strange science called psychology that weaves a subconscious story and its origin cannot be traced. It is a thriller that has some pace and that jerks your nerves for a moment.
Free fall…
Like our joyride in Orlando-
When you closed your eyes,
And held your hands in mine,
And completely relied upon me,
And we kissed the ground with no harm,
And started rising again.
Free fall…
Free fall…
Like we are descending from the heaven-
In one parachute umbrella,
And you hold me tight,
And completely rely upon me,
And kiss my lips with yours,
And calm down again.
Don’t look down!
We will land somehow,
Don’t worry about the disaster.
Free fall is a nightmare that may knock your mind and awake you from your sleep when you are enjoying the best moments of your life. Its about a strange science called psychology that weaves a subconscious story and its origin cannot be traced. It is a thriller that has some pace and that jerks your nerves for a moment.
Published 3rd Nov 2010
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3rd Nov 2010 12:57pm
there's not a single word that can describe how this poem made me feel!
it's breathtaking
it's breathtaking
7th Nov 2010 8:53am
I was not very sure whether my readers will like it or not and was jittery about posting it. But your comment has cleared all my doubts about the goodness of the script and I think I have more than succeeded.
Thank you Ophie.
6th Nov 2010 8:06am
7th Nov 2010 8:55am
