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Death Of A Dumbass (I Told You To Shut Up!)
Well fuck, you did it again.
You said some shit and lost another friend.
Keep it up man, you're doing fine.
You'll be alone in no time.
Do you ever learn?
Shut your mouth!
You make everyone go South..!
You talk so much shit from Monday to Sunday!
That's why people want you to burn!
And than you go emo and somewhat suicidal.
Your dumb ass should've stayed in the asylum.
I forgave you and you just did it again.
That's why you're dead.
You just had to say
"You can't do shit to me bitch..!"
Than I used you as pray.
Threw your remains in a ditch.
I have to say I'll probably have more fun!
because now you're done!
You said some shit and lost another friend.
Keep it up man, you're doing fine.
You'll be alone in no time.
Do you ever learn?
Shut your mouth!
You make everyone go South..!
You talk so much shit from Monday to Sunday!
That's why people want you to burn!
And than you go emo and somewhat suicidal.
Your dumb ass should've stayed in the asylum.
I forgave you and you just did it again.
That's why you're dead.
You just had to say
"You can't do shit to me bitch..!"
Than I used you as pray.
Threw your remains in a ditch.
I have to say I'll probably have more fun!
because now you're done!
Published 26th May 2013
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26th May 2013 6:32pm
This makes me want to punch someone in the face.
So much raw emotion conveyed by your pen.
So much raw emotion conveyed by your pen.
Ah, Thank you. It's actually a short punk rock song I wrote. I think about extending this sometimes but at the same time I feel like the poem's length can sort of tell how much time people should spend on a friend such as the one conveyed in the poem. The kind of friend who screws up and doesn't try to change or improve himself. Ya know?
27th May 2013 3:25am
Nice Work Sky~.
I really don't have much to say bur I enjoyed reading this and I feel bad for the dumbass its about.
I really don't have much to say bur I enjoyed reading this and I feel bad for the dumbass its about.
28th May 2013 7:21am
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