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Drive all Night
the roads an empty place
to be at night
with you on my mind
as sad songs play
on the radio
of love that’s lost
my eyes burn as
I hold back the tears
thinking of you
no road is too far
or mile too long
too keep me from your arms
to be at night
with you on my mind
as sad songs play
on the radio
of love that’s lost
my eyes burn as
I hold back the tears
thinking of you
no road is too far
or mile too long
too keep me from your arms
Published 26th May 2013
| Edited 27th May 2013
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Anonymous
26th May 2013 4:19pm
I know that feeling--well put!
nice work,luna :-)
nice work,luna :-)
26th May 2013 6:35pm
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Anonymous
26th May 2013 10:51pm
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27th May 2013 5:28pm
27th May 2013 7:49am
A nice flow to this,
as sad songs play
on the radio
of love that’s lost
my eyes burn as
I hold back the tears
thinking of you
very well written, felt!
as sad songs play
on the radio
of love that’s lost
my eyes burn as
I hold back the tears
thinking of you
very well written, felt!
27th May 2013 5:28pm
27th May 2013 12:43pm
The ached of missing a love is palpable,
definitely know this emotion well!
Outstanding ink spill :)
definitely know this emotion well!
Outstanding ink spill :)
27th May 2013 5:29pm
