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Self on steam

If you dress yourself up like a toilet.People will shit on you

Written by Deathpuppy

Published 21st May 2013

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Re: Self on steam

21st May 2013 9:51pm

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In you, on you.. point made
Luv the title too

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Re: Self on steam

22nd May 2013 3:24am

Thank you.You are my first comment ever.glad it was someone with the word cool in there name.

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Re: Self on steam

Anonymous

22nd May 2013 4:41pm

very true..and I like your mind-you think deeply and pen with potency.

Re: Self on steam

23rd May 2013 3:22pm

Pen with potency .Wow thank you

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Re: Self on steam

- Edited 27th May 2013 1:58am

27th May 2013 1:55am

I'm speechless!! Im out of breath from laughing! LMAO!!! :)

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Re: Self on steam

27th May 2013 3:18am

I would love to hear that laugh.I bet it wonderful laugh.thank you.

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