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Cat Napping In A Litter Box
Standing in the sun
hoping to fade
the shades,
of yesterday
two tarnished silver hearts
hang from my neck
Nash gave them to me
I hate that I'm filled with regret
self conscience ears
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean
I sleep way to much
but its cool
I'm living the dream
or so I would lead one to believe
out here
its the same bullshit
tired of trying
this time I quit
hoping to fade
the shades,
of yesterday
two tarnished silver hearts
hang from my neck
Nash gave them to me
I hate that I'm filled with regret
self conscience ears
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean
I sleep way to much
but its cool
I'm living the dream
or so I would lead one to believe
out here
its the same bullshit
tired of trying
this time I quit
Published 21st May 2013
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21st May 2013 5:54am
never stop trying!!!
self conscience ears
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean
great line
good job
self conscience ears
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean
great line
good job
21st May 2013 5:56am
21st May 2013 8:46am
"self conscience ears
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean" <--loved this especially!
Great Ink beautiful Nikki! Xo
hear
weird things,
you know what I mean" <--loved this especially!
Great Ink beautiful Nikki! Xo
eye like .... ditto what the other folks said, +
feel the pain,
feel thee 'i fckn give up'(s),
but
just keep on keepin-on any'way & maybe'like try to cultivate
a consciousness of Equanimity &
ultimately cancel yr subscription to OUR collective shallow Dualistic,Bi-Polar mindset...
OR:
don't
feel the pain,
feel thee 'i fckn give up'(s),
but
just keep on keepin-on any'way & maybe'like try to cultivate
a consciousness of Equanimity &
ultimately cancel yr subscription to OUR collective shallow Dualistic,Bi-Polar mindset...
OR:
don't
22nd May 2013 9:58pm
two tarnished silver hearts
hang from my neck
Nash gave them to me
I hate that I'm filled with regret
^raw, clever, very well written.
hang from my neck
Nash gave them to me
I hate that I'm filled with regret
^raw, clever, very well written.
23rd May 2013 12:17pm
Thanks everyone :) sucks I have to use my phone or this piece would have been longer, my phone can't keep up with my typing. :)
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- Edited 24th May 2013 00:30am
23rd May 2013 3:35pm
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Anonymous
24th May 2013 5:58pm
Stanzas 1 thru 4 - nothing but love for the simple, clever wording. They read deeper than one might expect at first glance.
The fatality of the last bit though... nope. Not buying it.
Glad to see you sharing again, Nikki! Always a pleasure to read ;)
The fatality of the last bit though... nope. Not buying it.
Glad to see you sharing again, Nikki! Always a pleasure to read ;)
