I Rage!

Whoa... THAT was a RAGE! I'm sorry to know ur in pain my friend, whatever n whenever u need an ear, I'm here

Muaahs,thank you nothing else need to be said.

Red

I just wish I could lend you a helping hand or a shoulder to cry on, Red; as you vent your rage, I'll patiently listen! What are friends for?

And I wish... that your wish would come true, Thank you.
 
Red

Yep, heard you loud and clear Red...well done!

strider

Thanks strider its just one of those meltdown moments.

Red

I see RED in this Work!!!
Flowing Pen Dear Red!!!

Yes Soul vivid ragging red, thank you.

Red

I know the feeling...in many ways. Good read, Red!

Thank you Grace I am sure all of us have meltdowns now an then.


Red

Love the release in this piece Gypsy, just like standing on the top of a mountain and screaming.

Two of my favourite songs when I feel like this are

"Bitch"  and "Sometimes I feel like screaming"  I like to be left alone also.

Great write dear. Be what you want when you want.

Amen to the last, this piece is my release publicly I have to keep my cool but here, this is my mountain and the piece my scream. Thank You my dear.

Red

Blimey your rage...and rock, much venom and well rage i this right, my sort of poetry great stuff dearest red.

Marcus

Thanks Marcus Just had to vent.

Red

Venting is good! Do as much as you need, whenever you need, in order to feel better.
I will say this, You 'Rage' Beautifully! Sending positive energy your way lovely Red! Xo

Ms.Rain I humbly accept the positive chi, it is much needed and well received.Thank you

Red

This Is So Powerful...
and heartfelt, much understood and over stood
YOU are MORE than a survivor you are elite spirit!




Fire

My sister your light is also an incandescent ray in the darkness thank you,much love.

Red

Lol Ethie, glad you did, I think we can all relate to this one,thanks for stopping by.

Red

now that is some serious venting Red...I don't like saying 'wow' to someone's distress but damn!!! This needs to be in spoken word..I can only imagine your voice to this...you might slam the mic down and break it after you're done with this diatribe lol...and the real beauty of this is that through it all you're still such a gracious writer...your artistry never ceases to shine even when you're pissed off...oh my goodness!!!

Friend Naajir you may be right I might have broken the mic. As a matter fact I do have two pieces on YouTube in spoken word and as you feel that this one would make a good spoken word piece,I will consider it. Thank you for stopping by I love seeing your comments.

Red