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Smiling
When he talks to her
she lights up
All smiles with the
perfect glow
He plays with her
just to get that
affect
Loving the feeling
he gets from her
actions
Her smile has
affected him
deep
Wanting to place
his thumb upon
her sweet lips
and rub
Taking her into
him passionately
so his head
meets hers
and noses
touch
They stand in
heated silence
smiling
she lights up
All smiles with the
perfect glow
He plays with her
just to get that
affect
Loving the feeling
he gets from her
actions
Her smile has
affected him
deep
Wanting to place
his thumb upon
her sweet lips
and rub
Taking her into
him passionately
so his head
meets hers
and noses
touch
They stand in
heated silence
smiling
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Re: Smiling
17th May 2013 11:53pm
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Anonymous
18th May 2013 4:05am
well done tl...strider...
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18th May 2013 10:47am
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Re: Smiling
18th May 2013 1:16pm
yes the smile works really when there is not lust and also when there is only lust
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