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Acid Washed Jeans.
"My tongue will slither out
and your brain will sizzle."
I'll hold you in my arms.
You'll shiver.
(I had forgotten how delicous
you looked when you're scared.)
Don't leave me, please.
It's worth it in the end, you'll see.
(The end that is.)
Lay with me as we dwindle down,
down, down, spinning in a vortex
of acid washed jeans and numbing
flesh.
and your brain will sizzle."
I'll hold you in my arms.
You'll shiver.
(I had forgotten how delicous
you looked when you're scared.)
Don't leave me, please.
It's worth it in the end, you'll see.
(The end that is.)
Lay with me as we dwindle down,
down, down, spinning in a vortex
of acid washed jeans and numbing
flesh.
Published 28th Oct 2010
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28th Oct 2010 7:38am
This is a poem about an acid trip (as you can see) and everything is all about symbolism. I quite enjoy the undefinied flow of an acidic ego but nothing's better than a good trip. :) Enjoy.
28th Oct 2010 9:02am
I feel this one is a masterpiece.
Each line of your imageries are extravagant the way they have been treated by your pen.
Each line of your imageries are extravagant the way they have been treated by your pen.
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