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Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
With
one
simple
inhale...
I thought
I caught
a
w
h
i
f
f
of you...
it's such
a magical feelin'
I entail
seein'
your beauty
come into
v
i
e
w...
yes my love
awash I am
in thoughts
of holdin' you...
haunt me
each day
as I ache
throughout
my soul
deeply implanted
inside,
hides a love so true...
I call out your name
as a subtle breeze
passes by my way
I'd swear these
occurances I fuse
into muse, just
like I'm pulled to do...
kisses on my heart
with your essence,
so real, I feel I could die...
it's on
another plane
another atmosphere
I fly...
booked first class
as this passion
feeds me anew...
but I guess
I've fallen too deeply
into a sleep
that's
s
l
e
e
p
l
e
s
s
in a past...
n' all I want
in this moment
is this dreamt up
ecstasy
to ever
n' forever
last...
one
simple
inhale...
I thought
I caught
a
w
h
i
f
f
of you...
it's such
a magical feelin'
I entail
seein'
your beauty
come into
v
i
e
w...
yes my love
awash I am
in thoughts
of holdin' you...
haunt me
each day
as I ache
throughout
my soul
deeply implanted
inside,
hides a love so true...
I call out your name
as a subtle breeze
passes by my way
I'd swear these
occurances I fuse
into muse, just
like I'm pulled to do...
kisses on my heart
with your essence,
so real, I feel I could die...
it's on
another plane
another atmosphere
I fly...
booked first class
as this passion
feeds me anew...
but I guess
I've fallen too deeply
into a sleep
that's
s
l
e
e
p
l
e
s
s
in a past...
n' all I want
in this moment
is this dreamt up
ecstasy
to ever
n' forever
last...
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Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
15th May 2013 10:53pm
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15th May 2013 10:56pm
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 00:14am
re: Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 5:13am
Aaaawwww u special sweetie you!
Thanks much for the compliments n support always! :)
Thanks much for the compliments n support always! :)
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 2:51am
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16th May 2013 5:21am
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 5:50am
Dreams are which the mind conceives, the heart desires, and the soul believes.
Rich, you are truly gifted with delivering emotions through ink!
Lovely Write!
Rich, you are truly gifted with delivering emotions through ink!
Lovely Write!
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re: Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 2:13pm
My dear i feel even MORE gifted by your sweet sweet support! :)
i thank u n lubbers ya much ... lol
i thank u n lubbers ya much ... lol
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 4:13pm
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16th May 2013 10:35pm
Aaaawwww well thank you again my O so beautiful one! lol
Truly appreciate you so much :)
Truly appreciate you so much :)
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
Anonymous
16th May 2013 5:16pm
This is filled with emotion, passion. A feel-good read & beautifully inked, Poetikmind! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
16th May 2013 10:37pm
You sweet comment made ME feel good my friend, thank you! I really appreciate you truly :)
Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
7th Aug 2014 1:29pm
i've gone trawling for your drawings...
brain in gear now and realised how i could find them...
this poem is, words, escape me....
how many times can i say that your words are beautiful?
i have to find another word PM...
astounding???
brain in gear now and realised how i could find them...
this poem is, words, escape me....
how many times can i say that your words are beautiful?
i have to find another word PM...
astounding???
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re: Re: Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
7th Aug 2014 2:54pm
Aaaaawwww I want soooooo much to kiss the sweetness
from your mouth right now!! Thank u my dear, I'm flattered n humbled :)
from your mouth right now!! Thank u my dear, I'm flattered n humbled :)
Re. Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2016 1:37am
awww , that's beautiful
:)
:)
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Re: Re. Mr. SandMan Please Sing me a Dream...
22nd Jun 2016 10:52am
Thank you Miki... So too are U beautiful...
Inside n out :). Appreciate you greatly :)
Inside n out :). Appreciate you greatly :)