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Still Waters Run Deep
I’ve clung to hope
like a life preserver
only to find
it offered a false
sense of security
never knowing how
deep the waters
of uncertainty
truly were
so I learned
how to swim
and found
I could let go
and float
on my own
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Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 3:22pm
re: Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 3:27pm
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Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 5:47pm
re: Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 11:26pm
Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 8:50pm
I relate well to this, as I do to most of your poetry.
it offered a false
sense of security
never knowing how
deep the waters
of uncertainty
truly were
You have a way of causing the reader
to grasp the important meaning in this,
whilst using clever metaphors :)
it offered a false
sense of security
never knowing how
deep the waters
of uncertainty
truly were
You have a way of causing the reader
to grasp the important meaning in this,
whilst using clever metaphors :)
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re: Re: Still Waters Run Deep
14th May 2013 11:27pm