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Sunday soccer
Shades of blue
were soft winds
this day, anew
Carried in four
leaves of green
with bud in rho.
beauty, sea of see
Mayflowers bloom
then there's me
millions a mile
from my place
gathering images
in sing and play
six stringed bling,
walks for me, paint
acoustic tapestry
in a thump and run
back street delicacy
known as taking walks
these sunny Sundays
are held, breaking life
In, as constant promise
strife is not always.
winds blow color
in one form or another
breezed by belief...
were soft winds
this day, anew
Carried in four
leaves of green
with bud in rho.
beauty, sea of see
Mayflowers bloom
then there's me
millions a mile
from my place
gathering images
in sing and play
six stringed bling,
walks for me, paint
acoustic tapestry
in a thump and run
back street delicacy
known as taking walks
these sunny Sundays
are held, breaking life
In, as constant promise
strife is not always.
winds blow color
in one form or another
breezed by belief...
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Re: Sunday soccer
13th May 2013 00:21am
I shut myself off from the world of football/soccer here. It gets too manic in the city centre.
A wonderful write nonetheless Soul, you make it sound so different.
A wonderful write nonetheless Soul, you make it sound so different.
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re: Re: Sunday soccer
13th May 2013 00:32am
Thank You Dear Magdalena:) I too care not for sports...jus kicking the ball around :)
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Anonymous
13th May 2013 4:21am
Can relate to this soul ...well written
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13th May 2013 4:35am
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13th May 2013 5:05am
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13th May 2013 5:25am
Awww why Thank You so Much Dear Broomie!!!
yes rare it is I write clear lol- apologies
Thank You for Visiting :)))
yes rare it is I write clear lol- apologies
Thank You for Visiting :)))
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13th May 2013 5:50am
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Anonymous
13th May 2013 9:17am
seems highly metaphorical and has an ease throughout that is softly serene for such a topic-I like this..clever soula :-)
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13th May 2013 2:15pm
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13th May 2013 1:44pm
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Re: Sunday soccer
13th May 2013 5:16pm
A positive write, words with a spring in their step
that dance around the page with the
enthusiasm you write with :)
that dance around the page with the
enthusiasm you write with :)
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13th May 2013 6:34pm
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13th May 2013 11:35pm
This was awesome... I love the music aaah
simply a gem of a piece Soul....
Magnificent
simply a gem of a piece Soul....
Magnificent
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re: Re: Sunday soccer
14th May 2013 00:11am
I am humbled and bow to the Queen!!!
I thank You Dearly Fire, Much appreciated!!!
I thank You Dearly Fire, Much appreciated!!!