Silver linings and Insignificance

Cool scenery...this needs to on canvas. Totally awesome.

Thank you, chilli :)

Thank you for visiting, Broom :)

not sure why but it took me dreaming to the stars....loved it!

Thank you, Mr Vortex.
The stars can be a good
place to dream :)

Maybe I'm tired, but I'm having trouble following the connection between the first stanza and the rest.

All of it beautifully written, and I love how insignificance is captured here

"As grass stems rock me in their
softly swaying hammock,
I feel weightless.

It was meant to capture waiting,
anticipating the night;
I'm not very good at time frames.
Thank you for your comment :)

Time frames were fine, I loved

"flit from the clock-hands to
the sky at compulsive
intervals"

I guess the first two lines I need to figure out, really, but no worries, I still enjoyed it very much.

there is something breath-taking...your words...:)

Thank you, Lunaz! :)

Beautifully penned & really nice imagery. Enjoyed the read a lot! :)

Carlene

Thank you, Carlene :)

Such a dreamy write Dear Scribbler!!!
one manner in which You describe things...
this write made me think...perfect cushioning:)

Thank you, Soul :)

Yes, you are definatly right, Scribbler, there is something fascinating in insignificance....Its being a part of the nothingness what makes it feel like floating like a feather....
Much enjoyed!

Thank you, Mourganna :)

I don't have a clue yet .... but I know its good...

REAL good..............

Thank you :)

I agree with everyone, this really is an amazing write, well done Scribbler :D
xox

Thank you, Darbence :)

ahhh Scribbler so cryptic and brilliant.. wonderful inking.. peace Crim

Thank you kindly, Crim :)

Beautiful imagery, I like the message of things we take forgranted or treat as insignificant are really worth a lot. In this case I see the narrator's point of view as laying in the grass waiting for the stars to come out. Those small distant lights that are still amazing.

I kind of get a sense that the reader is literally going blind though. But even as metaphor I guess going blind works because she's closing her eyes to the things we see as important and opening them to things we ignore.

Wonderful writing Scribbs

Thank you, you understood exactly
what I was trying to get across :)

Thank you for your comment wolfman!

All of the poem was very good but you really have a way with endings.

Thank you, No1 :)

Thank you for your golden kindness, Kasupuu :)

Once I read the title....I knew this would be an amazing read! I was not disappointed!:)
Wonderful ink, Scribbler12

Thank you, Rain :)