ground zero (philosophical vantage point comp)

Damn, and Bam !

What I am working on right now doesn't even come close to what Jack wanted, so I threw an old one in there to support his comp, BUT !

You my friend have a winner here ;)

The psychology behind this is sound !

thank you Maggie.. I had been thinking on Jacks comp, and liked the challenge...honestly this came from somewhere else, but worked it til I thought it fit....glad the thought behind it seems sound

great job lightbaron....strider

thank ya kindly man

lb reminds me of peter steele. . he was a very antagahostic addiceted godd at everything, jus a really big fn guy whou you should prolly agree with, drunk aagian. jus ayinn...

hahaha...that makes enough sense to me brotha, and I take it as a hella compliment...thanks JR

A debunk poem, I like it. I had to read it a few times, lb, a sure sign of a lot of thought packed into a small space. Skillful, good luck with the comp.

:)

thank you kindly Atakti, I quite liked yours from the same comp, and good luck to you as well.... I suspect that that comp will draw some really strong writes...it should

I'm totally with Ataki. I also had to read it a few times, and that's pretty kickass. Not that I had to re-read, but that there was more under the surface.

You broke the shit out of the image: "under the heat of thermite
and the engineering of Jenga"

Thermite has what? A bazillion Kelvins? And the teetering image of a stack of Jenga blocks in correlation to that was fan-freakin-tastic.

Good luck!

dig it Betty, glad that imagery worked well for you. Really wanted to downplay the "inside job" stuff , because I think that the reason people who like the looks of it, do so because I feel it almost gives them what they consider this "deeper" layer of reality, what's "really going on"...and fine, conspiracy, if well done I think looks kind of cool....but, I like the look of a layer of what "might be what's goin on" better, that involves an inspired group of people attacking the largest icon of an economy that forces the entire world to play a game that is just a silly, dangerously silly game for many

ehh, i'll put down the bullhorn now, thank you very much

Excellent job, a very good take on a love poem.

very kind scribbler, thanking you kindly!