Float me up...

wow i loved it... although not descriptive i no exactly what u say and mental picture great job

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So much yearning here....and yes I do like the sound of that lol:)


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Seducing the readers with every word, leaving a need to be filled! I can feel your floating... ;)
Poetic love~

thanks
love to soar!!!
thanks for reading

the sub asking for what she needs, very nicely done, great write :)

great dom who allows her to beg
thank you ;)

The repetition of subspace lowered the gravity around me with each stanza. I enjoyed this one! And I'll admit erotic poems aren't my thing... but you have drilled through that invisible wall and penetrated my brain. Nice!

wow
what a comment
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and I don't even consider this one of my best.
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here's a goodie


Teach Me How to be Naughty

Will you teach me how to be naughty
take my offered innocence away
help me darken up my bright halo
won't you come to me and lead me astray
  
  
No more hiding behind this symbol
uncharted treasures await your touch
will you teach me how to be naughty
please, my body needs this so much
  
  
I will shed my wings to be with you
there's an itch that I need you to scratch
will you teach me how to be naughty
all the pleasures you teach I will match


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Well, damn...I felt the rise of this poems as I read each stanza. Floating the reader up to an orgasmic pleasure in this submissive piece. Very well connected...and, I love the pic too!:)

thank you!!!
great comment
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Loved Float Me Up, as a master of a few subs ive had to show them all this.
A wonderful work.
Thanks

interesting comment
thanks for reading
Check out "Angel of Submission" on my page
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