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Float me up...
Float me up into subspace
overwhelm my existence for me
your domination is pure perfection
I surrender, my mind is free
Float me up into subspace
set the core of my body on fire
I'll gift you my total submission
then trust you to fulfill my desire
Float me up into subspace
lick and suck me until I roar
penetrate and probe my whole body
send me up, please Sir make me soar
Float me up into subspace
satiate me before I come down
my entire being needs to please you
my dear Sir, I hope you like that sound
overwhelm my existence for me
your domination is pure perfection
I surrender, my mind is free
Float me up into subspace
set the core of my body on fire
I'll gift you my total submission
then trust you to fulfill my desire
Float me up into subspace
lick and suck me until I roar
penetrate and probe my whole body
send me up, please Sir make me soar
Float me up into subspace
satiate me before I come down
my entire being needs to please you
my dear Sir, I hope you like that sound
Published 9th May 2013
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9th May 2013 9:12pm
wow i loved it... although not descriptive i no exactly what u say and mental picture great job
9th May 2013 9:20pm
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- Edited 10th May 2013 1:18am
9th May 2013 10:50pm
So much yearning here....and yes I do like the sound of that lol:)
Ooops
Ooops
9th May 2013 11:59pm
10th May 2013 00:17am
Seducing the readers with every word, leaving a need to be filled! I can feel your floating... ;)
Poetic love~
Poetic love~
10th May 2013 1:01am
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10th May 2013 3:14am
The repetition of subspace lowered the gravity around me with each stanza. I enjoyed this one! And I'll admit erotic poems aren't my thing... but you have drilled through that invisible wall and penetrated my brain. Nice!
10th May 2013 3:26am
wow
what a comment
thank you for checking me out
and I don't even consider this one of my best.
try to check out my page.
here's a goodie
Teach Me How to be Naughty
Will you teach me how to be naughty
take my offered innocence away
help me darken up my bright halo
won't you come to me and lead me astray
No more hiding behind this symbol
uncharted treasures await your touch
will you teach me how to be naughty
please, my body needs this so much
I will shed my wings to be with you
there's an itch that I need you to scratch
will you teach me how to be naughty
all the pleasures you teach I will match
stay tuned...
what a comment
thank you for checking me out
and I don't even consider this one of my best.
try to check out my page.
here's a goodie
Teach Me How to be Naughty
Will you teach me how to be naughty
take my offered innocence away
help me darken up my bright halo
won't you come to me and lead me astray
No more hiding behind this symbol
uncharted treasures await your touch
will you teach me how to be naughty
please, my body needs this so much
I will shed my wings to be with you
there's an itch that I need you to scratch
will you teach me how to be naughty
all the pleasures you teach I will match
stay tuned...
Well, damn...I felt the rise of this poems as I read each stanza. Floating the reader up to an orgasmic pleasure in this submissive piece. Very well connected...and, I love the pic too!:)
10th May 2013 4:23am
10th May 2013 7:50am
Loved Float Me Up, as a master of a few subs ive had to show them all this.
A wonderful work.
Thanks
A wonderful work.
Thanks
10th May 2013 8:11am
interesting comment
thanks for reading
Check out "Angel of Submission" on my page
stay tuned...
thanks for reading
Check out "Angel of Submission" on my page
stay tuned...
