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I am a Submissive Woman
i am a submissive woman,
i stand strong and proud,
Never weak or stupid.
i will look to my loving Master for guidance and protection,
for never will i be more complete than when He is with me.
i am a submissive woman,
i serve without weakness,
i serve with pride.
My body is His, and if He says i am beautiful, then i am.
No matter what i look like to others, i am beautiful in His eyes.
I am a submissive woman,
a Pet
a Slut
a Whore
i am what He wants me to be
i am proud to call myself that,
my submission is a gift that i do not give lightly,
and can only be given to the One who can appreciate that gift and return it tenfold.
Only to my Master who has that strength, will i give myself fully
i am a submissive woman.
i stand strong and proud,
Never weak or stupid.
i will look to my loving Master for guidance and protection,
for never will i be more complete than when He is with me.
i am a submissive woman,
i serve without weakness,
i serve with pride.
My body is His, and if He says i am beautiful, then i am.
No matter what i look like to others, i am beautiful in His eyes.
I am a submissive woman,
a Pet
a Slut
a Whore
i am what He wants me to be
i am proud to call myself that,
my submission is a gift that i do not give lightly,
and can only be given to the One who can appreciate that gift and return it tenfold.
Only to my Master who has that strength, will i give myself fully
i am a submissive woman.
Published 8th May 2013
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Anonymous
8th May 2013 10:50pm
I enjoy this piece. It's well written and thought provoking. Many equate submissiveness with weakness. As you well state in the 3rd stanza,
"i am a submissive woman,
i serve without weakness,
i serve with pride."
being submissive is far from being weak. As long as your desires are satisfied and you are treated well and with respect...said as I descend from my soapbox :)
"i am a submissive woman,
i serve without weakness,
i serve with pride."
being submissive is far from being weak. As long as your desires are satisfied and you are treated well and with respect...said as I descend from my soapbox :)
9th May 2013 2:05am
9th May 2013 00:53am
Hi PetPhoenix,
I am a man who enjoys being sexually submissive and I relate to your poem as such. You could take a read of my poems to get a sense of who I am. Thank you for your poem. I enjoy it. One little question: Maybe you should reconsider your use of the lower case i. It strikes me as being at odds with standing proud and strong.
I am a man who enjoys being sexually submissive and I relate to your poem as such. You could take a read of my poems to get a sense of who I am. Thank you for your poem. I enjoy it. One little question: Maybe you should reconsider your use of the lower case i. It strikes me as being at odds with standing proud and strong.
9th May 2013 2:05am
Skylark, thank you for your comment, it was well recieved.
I use the lowercase "i" to signify my standing in my relation to my Master. Whenever talking about yourself in terms of the lifestyle, a submissive should try to always use the lowercase, to show their Top/Dom/Domme, what have you, that you are not above them. I hope this helps explain my use of it.
I use the lowercase "i" to signify my standing in my relation to my Master. Whenever talking about yourself in terms of the lifestyle, a submissive should try to always use the lowercase, to show their Top/Dom/Domme, what have you, that you are not above them. I hope this helps explain my use of it.
