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~ One-Night/Stay/in/Stylish/Wall/Street/Boutique/Hotel ~
"Gild Hall, a Thompson Hotel
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›See the deal"
wall street
bou tique,
wee,oui,
iyam yr lover, gone dark
by much'old
residue,blown'back
oversouled
underpaid[under'stand!]marked for highpenetration
of an ungood
paradigm/lifestyle/infra'structure, muchlike
this ass'ininity i'rite wright here,sealed
in phantasy envelopes,
just'awaitin for the kids to respond(if-at-all)
boutique wallstreet...'ere buysellers
scream buyselling,spittle -sprayin allover
each&other seeking heaven wit a mitey-dose
of kapital'gain,[a]suite-onWallSt-booteak &
a
lameheart like this,like
this-one-h'ere,
dies a little morebetter wit eachyevery
microsecond[ary]
trade -
'> see the deal', see It now,
[a]rite
ripe wit th'dust of our monkeybones
still insisting eter
nity
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$254 From $159 Save 37%
›See the deal"
wall street
bou tique,
wee,oui,
iyam yr lover, gone dark
by much'old
residue,blown'back
oversouled
underpaid[under'stand!]marked for highpenetration
of an ungood
paradigm/lifestyle/infra'structure, muchlike
this ass'ininity i'rite wright here,sealed
in phantasy envelopes,
just'awaitin for the kids to respond(if-at-all)
boutique wallstreet...'ere buysellers
scream buyselling,spittle -sprayin allover
each&other seeking heaven wit a mitey-dose
of kapital'gain,[a]suite-onWallSt-booteak &
a
lameheart like this,like
this-one-h'ere,
dies a little morebetter wit eachyevery
microsecond[ary]
trade -
'> see the deal', see It now,
[a]rite
ripe wit th'dust of our monkeybones
still insisting eter
nity
XXXXX-dkzk2013[[phfoto;dkzk[[[xxxxxxxxxxx
Published 6th May 2013
| Edited 7th May 2013
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7th May 2013 10:46am
i feel silly commenting on your work but uh the deal doesn't come up when I click on it
I still enjoyed the poem very much
I still enjoyed the poem very much
7th May 2013 2:41pm
'silly'?....comments on 'my work' are so precious-few rarities that GoddBless any/all who dare admit to even reading it....
& besides, 'silly', in MYwarp'ed Brain, is an attribute
t'which eye now ardently strive to'wards
thankye, kid
& besides, 'silly', in MYwarp'ed Brain, is an attribute
t'which eye now ardently strive to'wards
thankye, kid
