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a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" comp)
she, in the kitchen, makes
medicine and supper
mincing lavender
and garlic
turmeric and cumin
telling him
that his pitta
or kapha
is too high
or too low
he doesn't remember
but knows
she and these plants
have their ways
and he with his
in the basement
weighing out dosages
of devotion to Kali
and Bacchus
read by the oracles
of the moonfed herbs
medicine and supper
mincing lavender
and garlic
turmeric and cumin
telling him
that his pitta
or kapha
is too high
or too low
he doesn't remember
but knows
she and these plants
have their ways
and he with his
in the basement
weighing out dosages
of devotion to Kali
and Bacchus
read by the oracles
of the moonfed herbs
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Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
5th May 2013 6:25pm
Very fragrant poem,
and he with his
in the basement
weighing out dosages
of devotion to Kali
and Bacchus
^^My favorite part.
Very well written :)
and he with his
in the basement
weighing out dosages
of devotion to Kali
and Bacchus
^^My favorite part.
Very well written :)
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re: Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
5th May 2013 8:39pm
Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
Anonymous
5th May 2013 6:42pm
Casey, I smiled and giggled all through this. Nourishment for both body and soul, plus a healthy wink. Possibly my new favorite from you. On my reading list.
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re: Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
5th May 2013 8:41pm
gnarly...couldn't hope for more to have been read from this. high praise indeed
Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
Anonymous
6th May 2013 2:27am
Good luck lb...nice write
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re: Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
6th May 2013 12:47pm
Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
6th May 2013 2:35am
LB, sorry man , nothing but admiration for you on this, liked it all. Figured I'd put some words together to relay that ..so went ahead and done it.
Anyhow, shine.on man.
Anyhow, shine.on man.
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re: Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
6th May 2013 12:48pm
ah, lep plenty there man, I thank you very much.
(wondering on your health man?)
(wondering on your health man?)
Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
7th May 2013 3:05pm
Well...
If you don't win with this beauty, I might have to protest. I could do a Godiva, and streak naked through the comp?
Uhm... wait... No
That would scare the shit out of everyone ! lol
As always Hun, damn fine work :)
If you don't win with this beauty, I might have to protest. I could do a Godiva, and streak naked through the comp?
Uhm... wait... No
That would scare the shit out of everyone ! lol
As always Hun, damn fine work :)
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re: Re: a simple snippet from the witch's kitchen (for "herb" co
7th May 2013 3:19pm
I highly doubt that I will win that comp, but I thank ya kindly for saying so. I use the comps as prompts, I think they are great for staying warm... Thank ya much for the kind words Maggie