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love

lay my heart down
the end in sight
unlucky in love
a dull kife lay in my heart
i can't go on with out you love
you never held on
how did it end up like this
deep through the end

i see a new fire in my hart
the love is in sight
lucky in love
what was a dull knife that lay in my heart
is now a love of a man so sweet
he holds on whith sweet love for me
how did i end up like this
a love so sweet


Written by sbenavidez (stepahnie renee benavide)
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