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Adventures of a Sexual Nature
I delved deep within the cooch of the forest,
and all I got was a rash....
and all I got was a rash....
Published 16th Oct 2010
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16th Oct 2010 4:52am
cooch, on the other hand... well hell, why not use both hands?
but seriously, your unseriousness actually means something; more than
most of the 'dark poetry raft-o-shit' crap that pretty much browns out
the eyes of DU. (yeah, i know, damn, i being serious...)
but seriously, your unseriousness actually means something; more than
most of the 'dark poetry raft-o-shit' crap that pretty much browns out
the eyes of DU. (yeah, i know, damn, i being serious...)
Spanks, Ray. I see where you're going with that. I'm very rarely serious and when I am it feels a lot like cramps. :)
16th Oct 2010 7:28am
terribly dark to dig out the feelings and highly erotic. You have created a huge magic field in just two lines.
16th Oct 2010 7:33am
Thanks, Anando. It's just a tid bit of comedy, I'm glad you liked the eroticism shoved up all in there, lol. :D
16th Oct 2010 9:55am
You write with reckless abandon and that is a style in itself.
The poem comes with an erotic stench.
The poem comes with an erotic stench.
16th Oct 2010 9:59am
Thank you, Divine! I love that, 'erotic stench', very beautiful little phrase there. :) Thanks again.
17th Oct 2010 1:15am
short and to the point much like the action in itself.i was so eager to read it i got it all naked and unwrapped and once inside infected before even reading a single word came and left. with a waft of my hand i can still catch its scent rising of my detumescent tool.
17th Oct 2010 2:20am
Wow, that was beautiful Swords. I'm honored to have your detumescent tool on my poems comments. :) Thanks so much, that was a lovely poem all in itself. :D
