Nocturnal emissions...

I feel you on this one Gypsy those ghostly fingers caressing you in the night..hauntingly lovely poem..peace Crim

Thank you so much sweet Crim, we need to call ghost busters on them lol.

Red

Oh the sweet torment Red...nice write!

Strider

Hahaha yes ol boy I know YOU know about such things lol.Thank you for stopping by.

Red

Even the words are skilfully and beautifully used. It's rare to find a poem in DUP which shows that the author took quality time with his or her diction. This is one rarity. It's refreshing to read. And the tone is quite consistent throughout.

Good work, Red.

Wow such high praise my friend I am humbled by your kind words. Thank you so very much I value your opinion greatly.

Red

I feel you Gypsy dear, I burned into a pile of dust, such torment is enough to do that.

Wonderful wistful aching.

Yes dear heart we do endure such horrid torments, thanks for stopping by.

Red

Red hot write, Gypsy, with apparition picture to match. The arousal is obvious on her breasts. (Might have been worked into the lines.)

Thank you! The combing was tricky, I was trying to keep it tasteful. Thank you for the suggestion had not thought of that, will keep it in mind for future editing.

Red  

What Demo. said up there is quite true, This was crafted with care, Beautifully. An Artist You ALWAYS are, pen the sensual with ease...Ahhh but this is a magical one!!!
to pen in silk and live as nuns--for shame that
where as I would say I live as a priest-but they attain more action than I :)
Gorgeous Dear Red!!!

I love it,I love it,I love it... your comment put a huge smile on my face thank you so much Soul!


Red

In response to this I was wondering what would be more welcomed, a preacher or black magic expert. What also came to mind is the title of Suzanne Vegas's most popular cd, "Solitude Standing".

A barren desert also popped into my brain.

Thanks for sharing this composition.

Both Jazz lol you always see things with a unique eye. Thanks for reading my work.

Red

no thanks needed---even if I get the meaning messed up, you always write what is worth reading

:-)

Mmm... Nothing more invigorating & debilitating as that proverbial itch you can't quite scratch... This beautiful ink represents that gnawing, passionate beast that gets awakened with lustful angst & guiltily craving all manner of pleasurable debauchery... Exquisite Red! ;-)

D, I see you are familiar with the hedonistic pleasures that can arise when we in repose lol,thanks for stopping by. :-)


Red