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My Humble Compliance

From across a room our eyes lock
you grin and my heart skips a beat
who are you? you radiate potency
I can imagine myself at your feet
envisioning my blushing, I quickly look away
I look for you again but you are not there
I gasp as I expel the breath I had swallowed
while my subconscious is screaming "beware"

Your face, now scorched in my minds eye
causing electricity to dance down my spine
from behind me a scent sparks my longing
erotic thoughts now commence to mind
as my pulse rate increases, I turn
it is you, but you saunter on by
I watch you and you ooze temptation
and while gazing upon you, I sigh

Just a transient cause of frustration
nonetheless, your presence dominates my head
forasmuch as I wanted to approach you
I decide I should just go home instead
handing the valet my keys, I waited
but he didn't bring my car back, it was you
my mouth dried up and I couldn't  breathe
I didn't even know what I should do

standing there frozen, like time stood still
I thought I'd collapse on the floor
you came to me, then you guided me back
then like a gentlemen, you opened my door
your hand brushed mine as you passed my keys
I thought I might spontaneously combust
you leaned over and whispered in my ear
"your beautiful and you fill me full of lust"

my knees started to melt and I staggered
you wrapped a warm arm around my waist
then nestled my body adjacent to yours
and raised my chin so we were face to face
our eyes locked again in a frenzied glare
a sovereignty radiated from your expression
you conveyed a compulsion for me to submit
I felt the need to become your possession

you said you'd like me to follow you home
without hesitation I told you I would
being filled with so much anticipation
I knew that this night would be good
we drove toward town to your penthouse
I parked my car right next to your spot
you opened my door and took my hand
and I began to feel extremely hot

we took the elevator, my hand still in yours
as the doors shut, I could feel your glare
when you pushed down the red stop button
I knew that we were going nowhere
you gathered me to you body with a force
gently pulling my hair, you kissed me deeply
feasting on my lips as if you was starved
you fueled my attraction so completely

Pulling back from our kiss, we were panting
you restarted the elevators ascend
with an arm around my waist, you led me
I felt the need for you to kiss me again
we stepped inside and you poured us a drink
my hand trembled so much that you noticed
you whispered into my ear "feel, don't think"
then you swept me away to your room

We kissed again with a reckless abandon
your touch somehow liberated my inhibitions
my splendid submission sent me into subspace
sensations overwhelmed me from your domination
no one's ever equaled your astounding endurance
your carnal ascendancy persisted all night
I humbly complied with your every command
and you mastered my body, just right
Written by Deborahlee3313 (poetry in oceans)
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