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If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
An enigma...
that stigma
don’t try
n' poke me
in my eye
I’m more
than you know
but I’m just
here to show
how my
creativity fly
so don’t try
n' box me in
I refuse to be
to what you think
I should be
see,
God has
blessed
this hand with
a certain
versatility
and I feel
it’s purely
incumbent
upon me
to give back
to this world
of different
personalities
so please
just relax
or move on,
because
there’s no chance
in judgement
n' your stance
can't glance,
nor enhance
your definition
of what is
a supposedly
‘right way’ me
I’m simply God’s
gift to my mom
n' immediate family
that walks to be
uniquely seen
in a place
called society
a part of a whole
in this humanity
n’ me is all I’m ever
even tryin’
to remotely be…
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Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
Anonymous
26th Apr 2013 3:04pm
Oh yeah...this is confident without arrogance and convincing without conceit..real and potent. I like your style..the flair of inspiration I gain from any connection to a centered soul is immense and I got some from this--thank you!
Welcome to DUP-write on!
miki
Welcome to DUP-write on!
miki
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Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 4:32pm
Aaawww what an awesome comment!
thank you dear poetess n I appreciate your time n thoughts :)
thank you dear poetess n I appreciate your time n thoughts :)
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 4:35pm
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 4:43pm
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 4:54pm
And that is all one ever should try to be, is themselves.
A great write Poetikmind. :)
A great write Poetikmind. :)
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Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 5:12pm
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 6:54pm
Bro! The flow was silky smooth...And the message was even more cool, if that's possible...This is one of my fav's of yours...Spectacular ink my dude!
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Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 8:46pm
Thanks a ton bro! You know how much it means to me that you got my back! peace n love to you n yours always dude :)
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
Anonymous
26th Apr 2013 10:01pm
Loved the rhythm. Loved the wisdom. Tremendous write, Poetikmind. A wonderful read & sensational ink! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 10:51pm
Aaaawww my dear poetess, I thank you graciously n truly always appreciate your support of my work :)
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 10:27pm
Five star message!
Your delivery was powerful!
You never seem to amazing me!
Your ink is always a wow factor!
PEN LOVE ~
Your delivery was powerful!
You never seem to amazing me!
Your ink is always a wow factor!
PEN LOVE ~
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re: Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
26th Apr 2013 10:54pm
There she is! I was starting to get worried you left the country! lol jk... Thank you my dear lady, so pleased you feel that way, n hope to never disappoint you :)
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
27th Apr 2013 6:44am
these could be lyrics to a song.
great flow in your words.
great emotion.
Welcome to DUP
great flow in your words.
great emotion.
Welcome to DUP
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Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
27th Apr 2013 6:51am
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
28th Apr 2013 6:01am
Affirmation of self superbly manifested...yes bro..this here resonates!!! I'll have to come back to this from time...powerful piece!!!
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re: Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
28th Apr 2013 6:27am
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
28th Apr 2013 5:55pm
Re: If you don't like the Taste in my Mouth...
28th Apr 2013 11:15pm
Yea, I guess I deep a lil lol thank u my dear its very sweet of you to share your thought on my ink... I appreciate it so much :)