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haiku:
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I hunger
I feel therefore I hurt
version 2:
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I want
I feel therefore I suffer
I am inevitability therefore I die
version 3:
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I want
I feel therefore I suffer
I am impermanence therefore I die
(leave a comment, let me know which one you like best)
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I hunger
I feel therefore I hurt
version 2:
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I want
I feel therefore I suffer
I am inevitability therefore I die
version 3:
I think therefore I question
I exist therefore I want
I feel therefore I suffer
I am impermanence therefore I die
(leave a comment, let me know which one you like best)
Published 9th Oct 2010
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2010 5:40am
The second and third lines are excellent. A perfectly concise expression of just how painful and pointless the human experience is.
9th Oct 2010 5:45am
the human experience is pointless.. i like that.. it is isnt it.. i need some pussy or some drugs haha
27th Jan 2011 10:56am
i like the first one....its simple yet tells so much. especially the last line...i really likee
27th Jan 2011 8:17pm
we can all identify with hurt. we all hurt or have hurt. different levels and kinds and reactions from person to person...but we all hurt. I'm glad you dug the poem. i think i like the last line of the third most. i guess because i don't want to be eternal.
