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The End of Eden
In the garden
Adam watches Eve
thinking
he could spend hours
jerking off to lovely ass
bent over
fragrant
lilac bush.
Beautiful curves,
breasts swaying
beneath paradise sun,
butterflies
tickling
nipples firm.
Cock hard, he rests
against rough bark
of ancient tree;
aching for release:
between silken legs,
against
smooth tongue,
either will suffice,
temporarily.
Imagine…
fingers
wrapped around
shaft, lips wet
eyes skyward.
Stroke-length
increasing
intermittent gasps
escape.
She turns
to stare,
in awe…
apple in hand.
Adam watches Eve
thinking
he could spend hours
jerking off to lovely ass
bent over
fragrant
lilac bush.
Beautiful curves,
breasts swaying
beneath paradise sun,
butterflies
tickling
nipples firm.
Cock hard, he rests
against rough bark
of ancient tree;
aching for release:
between silken legs,
against
smooth tongue,
either will suffice,
temporarily.
Imagine…
fingers
wrapped around
shaft, lips wet
eyes skyward.
Stroke-length
increasing
intermittent gasps
escape.
She turns
to stare,
in awe…
apple in hand.
Published 20th Apr 2013
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20th Apr 2013 2:39am
really nice, the 1st recorded instance of masturbation, & the apple yet unbitten...
20th Apr 2013 10:58pm
Biblically, it's after Eden we read Adam first 'knew' Eve, after the imaginable trauma of eviction following the illicit fruit tasting.
21st Apr 2013 00:01am
To counter...it's all just fiction, as far as I'm concerned; but thank you for reading.
21st Apr 2013 00:08am
That sounds kind of snarky...seriously, I'm glad you read it :) I took creative license with the bible's tale and twisted it to suit a mood.
21st Apr 2013 3:46pm
20th Apr 2013 11:48pm
Right from the beginning of time it's always the guy who's caught doing the deed
21st Apr 2013 00:09am
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