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i hate ritin' shitty pooms like this - so pleas Like me,&pledge allegiance

I
caught up on re
views � �fo'gotting
� �t'do
my
t
ax e s � again
� � � � this year
� � � � lifetime
as-if
havin lost
me privates & stilts
� in th'newest eXlosion
� � �what sent them youngfolk
t'hebbin.....

damnbutt ain't eyefckn lucky?
� � � � � � � � �only
� � madbombers only bomb
� � � � myfcknMind
myfcknmind � �m e fckn m I n d
� � when ithink
� � � � �ishould
� � � � �be having
� � � � �a goodtime
� � � � �playin wit
� � � � �my brainy dick
dickybrain,
� � � � � � � �I
� � � � � � �magIne
� � � � �havin only painbloody
� � � � � � � � � �Xposed
shinbone[s]
� � � � t'run this great'merican
� � � � � � competionion
� � � � � � � �up'on?
more'n
10yrs at oilwar...or was it 150yrsRightGood
� � � imperial-robber barony / so many
� � wast'd pat'rioted ghosts,so
many towerin binladens t'make hollywooden
eXamples of

& GodBless' � �p r o fitter s'
� � � capital gains... �,

necessary,acceptable co'latteral
� � � � � damage[of] b'fuck'd assholes
� � � � � �hemo'rage redrivers
� � when fucked
'n killt for theyOwn � �makebelieve
� � � � � � � � � � � nation,theyOwn
� � � � � � � � � � � �Good,

fuck this po'em...fuck me...fuck me dead...th
� � � � � � � �th'ought
of Being Human is too,way too sick ----

Look At The Bright Side, youstupidFuck,
� � We Are Maked In Images of God-

my deep apologies hereby rendered for the wasted space/

Don't Stop Thee Carne'val......

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 17th Apr 2013

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Re: i hate ritin' shitty pooms like this - so pleas Like me,&pledg

LeMuseNoir

17th Apr 2013 4:59pm

Oscar Wilde said that we are all in the gutter- but that some of us are looking at the stars- the difference with you being that while others see only pinpoints of light - you see the same swirling orbs as Vincent saw when he gazed upon his own starry night- the ability to look not past- but into something is a rare gift - and your vision is as unique and true and painful(and pain-filled) as was his -- and I always know that I will find thesegreat truths very personally expressed when I read your verse.