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Soulful Dawn
Fingers of sunrays through my hair
smile of brightness into my eyes
whispers of good mornings
fragrance of promises
through coffee lips
listening quietly
gossamer
touches
love.
smile of brightness into my eyes
whispers of good mornings
fragrance of promises
through coffee lips
listening quietly
gossamer
touches
love.
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Re: Soulful Dawn
Anonymous
16th Apr 2013 1:50am
just lovely and aesthetically pleasing too. short but potent, well done soula :-)
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16th Apr 2013 4:44am
Thank You Dear Rain...experimenting a few things to see what others shapes can be formed:)
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2013 9:23am
Beautiful awakening soul...strider!
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16th Apr 2013 1:58pm
Nicely done Soul...looks like an inverted Fibonacci. I encourage you to do more of this. That's creativity only a genius can conjure!
Keep it up bro.
Keep it up bro.
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Re: Soulful Dawn
16th Apr 2013 8:23pm
I loved this, very clever style of writing.
I thought it was very effective,
tender write, Soul :)
I thought it was very effective,
tender write, Soul :)
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