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What I wouldn't do to...
I'd bring you
flowers everyday
just because
make each day
brighter than
the last one was
leave little notes
of I LOVE YOU..
in an unexpected place
I would spend
hours while you sleep,
just staring at your face
rub your feet for relief
after walking on them each day
open all doors, pull out chairs,
and all expenses I'll gladly pay
love you tender,
satisfy you long,
from my heart
I'll sing you sweet songs
keep the kids
out your hair,
and maintain the car,
because happy
is the place you belong
all these things you see
I'd instantly do with glee
if only I had you in love with me...
flowers everyday
just because
make each day
brighter than
the last one was
leave little notes
of I LOVE YOU..
in an unexpected place
I would spend
hours while you sleep,
just staring at your face
rub your feet for relief
after walking on them each day
open all doors, pull out chairs,
and all expenses I'll gladly pay
love you tender,
satisfy you long,
from my heart
I'll sing you sweet songs
keep the kids
out your hair,
and maintain the car,
because happy
is the place you belong
all these things you see
I'd instantly do with glee
if only I had you in love with me...
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15th Apr 2013 5:21pm
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15th Apr 2013 6:23pm
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15th Apr 2013 6:38pm
What a beautiful poem..I was smiling as I was reading then the last sentence had me say out loud "Oh no!"...
I liked it..what a great write :)
I liked it..what a great write :)
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15th Apr 2013 6:51pm
Thank you, very pleased to know it was
worth your time to read n leave such a wonderful comment
in ur ink debt I am! lol
worth your time to read n leave such a wonderful comment
in ur ink debt I am! lol
Re: What I wouldn't do to...
15th Apr 2013 6:50pm
A romantic and gentleman, very few left in the world, a sad end but a beautiful write. :)
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15th Apr 2013 7:09pm
Aaaawwww ur words like honey, are sooooo sweet! Thank you dear lady, I truly appreciate the read, comment n compliment! :)
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15th Apr 2013 7:59pm
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15th Apr 2013 10:47pm
I really appreciate this poem! It is nice to know that there are still gentlemen around! :) Nice write fellow poet!
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re: Re: What I wouldn't do to...
16th Apr 2013 00:08am
Thank you! That made me smile! :)
I'm really grateful for the kind comments
:)
I'm really grateful for the kind comments
:)
Re: What I wouldn't do to...
16th Apr 2013 3:56am
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16th Apr 2013 4:13am
Aaaawww ur welcome n I thank you too BUT in love? Lol
Lets just say I wish n dream alot lol
Lets just say I wish n dream alot lol
re: Re: What I wouldn't do to...
16th Apr 2013 4:15am
a good love starts with the imagination...now you got the tools go get err boi!!!
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16th Apr 2013 4:22am
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16th Apr 2013 4:14am
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18th Apr 2013 1:45pm
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18th Apr 2013 2:08pm
Thank u, well I agree there aren't too many of us left huh? lol
Thanks a ton for the read n comment I appreciate it :)
Thanks a ton for the read n comment I appreciate it :)
Re: What I wouldn't do to...
19th Apr 2013 00:27am
This was just flat-out well done, bro! Great flow, great tempo & pace...And the content?! You laced the smooth gentleman on 'em...lol nice!
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19th Apr 2013 00:33am
Weeellll u know how we do bro! I was just tryna hold it down til u got here! lol thanks a ton, always my bro!
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23rd Apr 2013 00:25am
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15th Feb 2019 4:49pm
Damn, I feel terrible I hadn’t noticed this til now...
:( but I am very grateful always
:( but I am very grateful always
Re: What I wouldn't do to...
10th Jul 2013 3:05am
As much as I appreciate a gentleman, I wouldnt want you to open the door for me, unless I was unable to. :) But aside from that, I loved the way in which you went about writing this poem, because it was so sweet and beautiful and that's one good thing about certain poems. Keep up the awesome work, Swan.
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10th Jul 2013 3:16am
Thank u my dear, I'm happy u liked BUT no open doors huh? Is that like an insult? My mommy talk me n my brothers it was proper to do that for a woman n it had Nothing to do with if she was disabled in anyway
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10th Jul 2013 3:26am
I'm independent. I can open my own doors.I was brought up to fend for myself. :)
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10th Jul 2013 3:31am
Lol I'm sure h can, it has nothing to do with it... That's he problem with this world today... Men aren't allowed to be MEN anymore...
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 4:16am
Pour your love out to someone trying to make them happy and they see you as nothing. Been here. Really felt this! :(
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re: Re: What I wouldn't do to...
17th Jul 2013 1:26pm
Yup so true my friend but hey that's how it goes right? thanks so much for ur support I appreciate it always :)
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21st Dec 2013 5:04am
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12th Feb 2014 10:06pm
The only one missing is say "honey you are right", when you know in reality she is wrong. :)
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Re. What I wouldn't do to...
10th Jan 2016 10:16am
What a lovely write.
I couldn't help but smile while reading it... until I got to the last line. What a beautiful sorrow.
Thank you for this piece.
Well done. c:
I couldn't help but smile while reading it... until I got to the last line. What a beautiful sorrow.
Thank you for this piece.
Well done. c:
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10th Jan 2016 11:57am
Aaaaawwww... She commented! lol
I'm honored, n truly thank u for your thoughts on my ink :)
I'm honored, n truly thank u for your thoughts on my ink :)
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13th Jan 2017 00:21am
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24th Sep 2017 10:27pm
I absolutely loved this... it was moving and heartfelt... great write! Can't wait until someone treats me that good. Lol.
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24th Sep 2017 11:02pm
Too bad for me I was just dreaming... thank you my sweet one, appreciate the thoughts n RL add... :)
Re. What I wouldn't do to...
15th Feb 2019 4:42pm
a man maintaining his woman..mentally..emotionally..physically...spiritually
this is just all around beautiful bro....
this is just all around beautiful bro....
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Re: Re. What I wouldn't do to...
15th Feb 2019 4:51pm
Truly shocked that a comment was made from this far back , not complaining just surprised becuz you know most wouldn’t take the time to look for something this old! Thanks bro!!
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15th Feb 2019 4:56pm
diggin in the crates of my favorite poets has become my new hobby of late...where i unearth so many gems such as this..
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15th Feb 2019 4:56pm
diggin in the crates of my favorite poets has become my new hobby of late...where i unearth so many gems such as this..
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