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Atoms
I sit and stare as from the dark side of the moon
Gazing across a vacuum, blackened firmament
Filled with history, mystery, imponderable majesty
Stupefying the mind of mere mankind
Endless depths.
As above so below philosophers proclaim
The stars spin silent though incomprehensible
Eons of time and space
Dying to be eternally reborn
They are but the atoms
The building blocks of the body of god
Gazing across a vacuum, blackened firmament
Filled with history, mystery, imponderable majesty
Stupefying the mind of mere mankind
Endless depths.
As above so below philosophers proclaim
The stars spin silent though incomprehensible
Eons of time and space
Dying to be eternally reborn
They are but the atoms
The building blocks of the body of god
Published 12th Apr 2013
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13th Apr 2013 6:20am
"Gazing across a vacuum, blackened firmament
Filled with history, mystery, imponderable majesty
Stupefying the mind of mere mankind" <--wow!
I often forget how diverse you are with a pen, blocat!
Your writing is absolutely Stunning!
I'm so use to the witty and hilarious writes, that when you ink other topics, I'm completely blown away!
LOVE THIS!
Filled with history, mystery, imponderable majesty
Stupefying the mind of mere mankind" <--wow!
I often forget how diverse you are with a pen, blocat!
Your writing is absolutely Stunning!
I'm so use to the witty and hilarious writes, that when you ink other topics, I'm completely blown away!
LOVE THIS!
15th Apr 2013 4:25am
Why thank you kindly Rain I wrote it after visiting a tiny island called Lundy on a diving trip. There is no light polution there and the stars looked so bright and beautiful I was awstruck and stayed up half the night just gazing upwards. They remined me of the pictures I've seen of the structure of atoms hence as above so below.
Luv & hugz,
B
Luv & hugz,
B
Anonymous
15th Apr 2013 4:59am
Wow, Blocat. From the broadest of vistas to atoms. I like this. "The building blocks of the body of god" - an interesting way to put it. Even my faithless self can accept such a definition. Nicely done!
23rd Apr 2013 11:33pm
Thanks Scat,
It was a thought I pondered long ago and it came back to me goodness knows why!
Glad you enjoyed it.
It was a thought I pondered long ago and it came back to me goodness knows why!
Glad you enjoyed it.
