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"Direct" ... A poem written by Big Virge 27/10/2005
You know i've had this said ...
"You're VERY ... DIRECT ... !!!!!"
I've also heard ....
"You're on the ... EDGE ... !!!!!"
Well ... have this one ...
On The ... Virge ... !!!!!!!!
My prose is built ...
on ... Factual Words ... !!!
as is ... My Life
A Life ... Pain-Filled ...
with ... Fading light ...
which could just be ... ?
because i'm NOT ... WHITE ... !?!?!
But that's not right ...
Or .... Is it folks .... ?!!!????????????????
This piece is ... Built ...
from ... Peoples' quotes ...
Quotes like ... This ...
"I can't deal ...
with your ... NEGATIVE VIBE ... !!!!!"
"So you're saying that I'm ...
A ... NEGATIVE GUY ..."
Cool hear these words
"Okay ... GOODBYE."
If that's friendship ...
I'd rather ... DIE ... !!!
These days it's hard
to just be nice ... !!!?!!!
See ...
These are also ...
Peoples' verbals ...
"Virge, don't take things personal !!!"
"Hold up now Geeze
if you aim at me
and knock my CHI
that's bound to ....
make me get angry !"
"I try to be true
when airing views
don't know about you
but check this news !!!"
"If I make ......
Your Calmness ...
.... CRACK .... !!!!!!
Trust in this ...
I DON"T WANT THAT ... !!!!!!
I'll walk away
and that's a ... FACT ... !!!!!!"
"I'm not into ...
raisING ... My Voice ...
cos' then i'm ... simply ...
making ... NOISE ... !!! ..."
"WHY ... Shout and Scream ?
Explain ... THAT ... choice ... ?
Does that help you ...
make your point ... ???"
Well I guess for SOME ...
They feel it does ... ?!?
But that's ....
NOT HOW ....
I want to be .... !!!
Unless you start ...
ATTACKING ... me ... !!!!!
That's how these
Politicians speak ...
Watch ... Question Time ...
on the ... BBC ...
How dare these MP's
try to preach ...
when they don't make
their point ... CALMLY ... ?!?
See ...
I've also had this ...
said to me ...
"Don't you ever shout your prose ?"
....... NO .......
because of .....
"THAT" .... Old quote ...
"THAT VIRGIL .... is ....
A SCARY Bloke ... !!!!!"
and that's before ...
i've even ... spoke ... ?!?
These attitudes ...
are such a ... JOKE ...
and should be subject ...
to a ..... " Vote " .....
Is it ..... My SIZE ... ?
or ... In My Eyes ... ??
or ... is it simply ... ???
down to this ...
My Confidence ...
around racists ...
who think they are
" The Ultimate "
Until they see ...
A man like ... ME ...
whose aura's ... STRONG ...
when I don't ...........................
...............................................
...............................................
...............................................
........... speak .........................
They are ... " THE WEAK " ...
who ... Cannot see ...
that they should ...
... " OPEN " ...
doors for me ...
instead of acting ...
... " Sheepishly " ...
and using ...
EVIL ... Energies
to leave ... My Form ...
of ..... " Poetry " .....
facing ... Vaders' ...
...... " DESTINY " ...... !!!!!
Anger's ... Swelling ...
"DEEP" ... in me ... !!!!!
while .... " Gatekeepers " ....
who ... HOLD THE KEYS ... !!!!!
Seem to .... " Fear " ... My Poetry ... ???
This is why ...
I'm So ... DIRECT ...
and will ... Expose ...
" Human Insects "
who claim to ... " HELP " ... !?!
but just .... INFECT ....
whilst making plans ....
in .... " SECRET SECTS " .... ?!!!?
THEY ... are ... DEVILS ... !!!!!
whom I ... DETEST ... !!!!!
who'll feel ... My Wrath
if they ... Protect ...
... " Themselves " ...
instead of ... Helping Those ...
who write ... " THE TRUTH "
within ... Their Prose ...
while Coc's ... The Drug ...
That FILLS ... Their Nose ... !!!!!
Pete Doherty ... did poetry ...
in places where ......
Poets ... now be ...
from ... Betterton Street
to the ... " BBC " ...
Are you people ...
Hearing me ... ?????
or ... "Dismissing"
words you read ....
I KNOW ... the world
has ... MANY ... seams
and DOES NOT ... Revolve ...
.... " Around " ... ME ... !!!!!!
Do my actions ...
or my ... ACTS ...
make you think ...
I DON"T GET THAT ... !!!!?!!!
I'm sure you know ...
and won't ... RETRACT ...
but should expect ....
that i'll ... STEP BACK ...
because when you check ....
I think you'll find ....
I'm TRYING ... !!!!!!
NOT TO ... Disrespect ... !!!!!!
But ... ALWAYS TRY ...
to be .............
Direct.
"You're VERY ... DIRECT ... !!!!!"
I've also heard ....
"You're on the ... EDGE ... !!!!!"
Well ... have this one ...
On The ... Virge ... !!!!!!!!
My prose is built ...
on ... Factual Words ... !!!
as is ... My Life
A Life ... Pain-Filled ...
with ... Fading light ...
which could just be ... ?
because i'm NOT ... WHITE ... !?!?!
But that's not right ...
Or .... Is it folks .... ?!!!????????????????
This piece is ... Built ...
from ... Peoples' quotes ...
Quotes like ... This ...
"I can't deal ...
with your ... NEGATIVE VIBE ... !!!!!"
"So you're saying that I'm ...
A ... NEGATIVE GUY ..."
Cool hear these words
"Okay ... GOODBYE."
If that's friendship ...
I'd rather ... DIE ... !!!
These days it's hard
to just be nice ... !!!?!!!
See ...
These are also ...
Peoples' verbals ...
"Virge, don't take things personal !!!"
"Hold up now Geeze
if you aim at me
and knock my CHI
that's bound to ....
make me get angry !"
"I try to be true
when airing views
don't know about you
but check this news !!!"
"If I make ......
Your Calmness ...
.... CRACK .... !!!!!!
Trust in this ...
I DON"T WANT THAT ... !!!!!!
I'll walk away
and that's a ... FACT ... !!!!!!"
"I'm not into ...
raisING ... My Voice ...
cos' then i'm ... simply ...
making ... NOISE ... !!! ..."
"WHY ... Shout and Scream ?
Explain ... THAT ... choice ... ?
Does that help you ...
make your point ... ???"
Well I guess for SOME ...
They feel it does ... ?!?
But that's ....
NOT HOW ....
I want to be .... !!!
Unless you start ...
ATTACKING ... me ... !!!!!
That's how these
Politicians speak ...
Watch ... Question Time ...
on the ... BBC ...
How dare these MP's
try to preach ...
when they don't make
their point ... CALMLY ... ?!?
See ...
I've also had this ...
said to me ...
"Don't you ever shout your prose ?"
....... NO .......
because of .....
"THAT" .... Old quote ...
"THAT VIRGIL .... is ....
A SCARY Bloke ... !!!!!"
and that's before ...
i've even ... spoke ... ?!?
These attitudes ...
are such a ... JOKE ...
and should be subject ...
to a ..... " Vote " .....
Is it ..... My SIZE ... ?
or ... In My Eyes ... ??
or ... is it simply ... ???
down to this ...
My Confidence ...
around racists ...
who think they are
" The Ultimate "
Until they see ...
A man like ... ME ...
whose aura's ... STRONG ...
when I don't ...........................
...............................................
...............................................
...............................................
........... speak .........................
They are ... " THE WEAK " ...
who ... Cannot see ...
that they should ...
... " OPEN " ...
doors for me ...
instead of acting ...
... " Sheepishly " ...
and using ...
EVIL ... Energies
to leave ... My Form ...
of ..... " Poetry " .....
facing ... Vaders' ...
...... " DESTINY " ...... !!!!!
Anger's ... Swelling ...
"DEEP" ... in me ... !!!!!
while .... " Gatekeepers " ....
who ... HOLD THE KEYS ... !!!!!
Seem to .... " Fear " ... My Poetry ... ???
This is why ...
I'm So ... DIRECT ...
and will ... Expose ...
" Human Insects "
who claim to ... " HELP " ... !?!
but just .... INFECT ....
whilst making plans ....
in .... " SECRET SECTS " .... ?!!!?
THEY ... are ... DEVILS ... !!!!!
whom I ... DETEST ... !!!!!
who'll feel ... My Wrath
if they ... Protect ...
... " Themselves " ...
instead of ... Helping Those ...
who write ... " THE TRUTH "
within ... Their Prose ...
while Coc's ... The Drug ...
That FILLS ... Their Nose ... !!!!!
Pete Doherty ... did poetry ...
in places where ......
Poets ... now be ...
from ... Betterton Street
to the ... " BBC " ...
Are you people ...
Hearing me ... ?????
or ... "Dismissing"
words you read ....
I KNOW ... the world
has ... MANY ... seams
and DOES NOT ... Revolve ...
.... " Around " ... ME ... !!!!!!
Do my actions ...
or my ... ACTS ...
make you think ...
I DON"T GET THAT ... !!!!?!!!
I'm sure you know ...
and won't ... RETRACT ...
but should expect ....
that i'll ... STEP BACK ...
because when you check ....
I think you'll find ....
I'm TRYING ... !!!!!!
NOT TO ... Disrespect ... !!!!!!
But ... ALWAYS TRY ...
to be .............
Direct.
Published 10th Apr 2013
| Edited 18th Apr 2013
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20th Jan 2014 5:48am
"You're on the ... EDGE ... !!!!!"
Well ... have this one ...
On The ... Virge ... !!!!!!!!
On the Virge sounds about correct to me,
the anger of this particular poem blasted of my screen, showing a poets soul balancing on the edge of sanity...and although that is where brilliance is born, it is also where the weak tumble.
The truth once again was strong in this piece.
Stay strong my friend, I would love to read even more :D
Well ... have this one ...
On The ... Virge ... !!!!!!!!
On the Virge sounds about correct to me,
the anger of this particular poem blasted of my screen, showing a poets soul balancing on the edge of sanity...and although that is where brilliance is born, it is also where the weak tumble.
The truth once again was strong in this piece.
Stay strong my friend, I would love to read even more :D
Yes Yes AC … !!!
At the time of filming it, BELIEVE ME, I had good reason to be VERY ANGRY !!!
…. but, probably, not as much as when it was written, the key is to control that anger, and, channel it right ???
So far, i'm still standing, and, avoiding tumbles !!!
Strong/Weak, the lines are now, somewhat blurred
Unlike the lines of moi … Big Virge … LOL !!!
More coming bro, much more coming ….
Thanks for commenting ….
Virge
At the time of filming it, BELIEVE ME, I had good reason to be VERY ANGRY !!!
…. but, probably, not as much as when it was written, the key is to control that anger, and, channel it right ???
So far, i'm still standing, and, avoiding tumbles !!!
Strong/Weak, the lines are now, somewhat blurred
Unlike the lines of moi … Big Virge … LOL !!!
More coming bro, much more coming ….
Thanks for commenting ….
Virge
21st Jan 2014 9:25pm
Had to comment on this piece! It gave me chills! Your accent, your words, your emotions....brought this message to life. Absolutely love this, Virge! Xo
Pen Respect~
Pen Respect~
Hey Hey Rain1 … !!!
Hope all is well wid' you and yours firstly … !!!
Chills …. oooooooooohhhhh ….
I do hope … NOT … LOL
Yeah well, sometimes the angst will out ya know ….
Timing is everything and I was in the right mood when shooting !!!
Many Many Thanks for your comment & love ….
Hold it up !!!
and I do need to get to YOUR stuff …
But as you can see, i'm a busy one !!!
V … back atcha !!!
Hope all is well wid' you and yours firstly … !!!
Chills …. oooooooooohhhhh ….
I do hope … NOT … LOL
Yeah well, sometimes the angst will out ya know ….
Timing is everything and I was in the right mood when shooting !!!
Many Many Thanks for your comment & love ….
Hold it up !!!
and I do need to get to YOUR stuff …
But as you can see, i'm a busy one !!!
V … back atcha !!!
28th Jan 2014 9:04pm
28th Jan 2014 9:46pm
10th Sep 2016 3:32am
11th Sep 2016 7:16pm
You'll probably never read this however, WoW. Dark depths of truth, a facing in acceptance of one's self. All sorts of dark vibrant hues, powerful, strength vulnerability, an almost playfulness i loved hearing your tones whispering about your tones. Deepest of Respect,
Survivor
Survivor
16th May 2018 7:03pm
Well Survivor, i'm happy to prove you wrong, darkness shrouds the light of these words .....
Thank you for commenting !
Respect and Appreciation
Right Back At Ya' .....
The Virge
Thank you for commenting !
Respect and Appreciation
Right Back At Ya' .....
The Virge
16th May 2018 11:02pm
Exactly why they are
Dark Vibrant Hues
not
Vibrant or Bright
I also get your work comes from a well of deep dark depths, wishing you a bit of ease, deepest of respect,
Survivor 👣
Dark Vibrant Hues
not
Vibrant or Bright
I also get your work comes from a well of deep dark depths, wishing you a bit of ease, deepest of respect,
Survivor 👣
18th May 2018 2:24am
Hey Survivor,
No Darkness that I can't handle .... Ha Ha ... !!!!
So far at least anyway, so, don't worry !
My being in the Caribbean Sunshine, keeps me light enough, trust me !
These pieces are from a deep place alright, the depth of my life experiences is all. I'm just fortunate enough to be able to articulate them, which is why most heads feel that they are so Dark & Doomy I guess ?
They're actually light, in comparison to the actual experiences.
One.
Virge
No Darkness that I can't handle .... Ha Ha ... !!!!
So far at least anyway, so, don't worry !
My being in the Caribbean Sunshine, keeps me light enough, trust me !
These pieces are from a deep place alright, the depth of my life experiences is all. I'm just fortunate enough to be able to articulate them, which is why most heads feel that they are so Dark & Doomy I guess ?
They're actually light, in comparison to the actual experiences.
One.
Virge
