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The Ethernet
Do you ever feel the vibes of those online?
Here on Dup and the ethernet reaching out
with a vine like grasp
either tickling your fancy or spiking you in agony
some just send out indifference
I can't respond to these types
strong emotion is what it takes to arrouse my senses
dark, light, and erotic as long as I feel it in my bones
some leave lavendar kisses that make the angles weep
others trace welts on my tender ass from the truth they speak
some are fanged monsters with pretty words
luring you into their trap
waiting to pounce on you and suck out your being
Though my question remains can you feel their vibes?
Tasting them and licking each flower from far away
in gigs and bytes riding the psychic flow
if they prick with their prodding feelers and my blood flows
I raise my radar ensuring this won't happen again
some never get a chance at my inner chambers
I can see them from far away
my third eye peering into their souls
a world apart but a ether vibe away.
Here on Dup and the ethernet reaching out
with a vine like grasp
either tickling your fancy or spiking you in agony
some just send out indifference
I can't respond to these types
strong emotion is what it takes to arrouse my senses
dark, light, and erotic as long as I feel it in my bones
some leave lavendar kisses that make the angles weep
others trace welts on my tender ass from the truth they speak
some are fanged monsters with pretty words
luring you into their trap
waiting to pounce on you and suck out your being
Though my question remains can you feel their vibes?
Tasting them and licking each flower from far away
in gigs and bytes riding the psychic flow
if they prick with their prodding feelers and my blood flows
I raise my radar ensuring this won't happen again
some never get a chance at my inner chambers
I can see them from far away
my third eye peering into their souls
a world apart but a ether vibe away.
Published 9th Apr 2013
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9th Apr 2013 00:50am
Excellent write Crim, I totally get it, I always pick up the different vibes/energies. :)
9th Apr 2013 1:00am
Thank you beautiful Magdalena..I know you see and pick up on vibes or you would never get past my dark front..much love Crim :)
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 00:52am
Awesome write crim...felt it!!!
Strider!
Strider!
9th Apr 2013 1:00am
9th Apr 2013 1:21am
Indeed I find this true, The ones I first followed I felt the essence of...shall we say...levels... right away instead of flat to their energy flow, and indeed the truly good seem to shine...I could keep rambling apologies Crim...
This Is a wonderful write and captures the oddness of how someone's write embodies their energy. A sensitive most Piece:)
This Is a wonderful write and captures the oddness of how someone's write embodies their energy. A sensitive most Piece:)
9th Apr 2013 1:31am
Thank you tender Soul..I loved your comment you have a most beautiful soul I can feel..peace Crim :)
9th Apr 2013 3:16am
this is an epic portayal of the darkness that we enter into freely, into the minds & mouths of strangers...
9th Apr 2013 6:27am
You've just described what I feel but
am not able to write down for lack of
words that seem to 'fit', if that makes
sense.
You have a beautiful soul, Crim.
Scribbler :)
am not able to write down for lack of
words that seem to 'fit', if that makes
sense.
You have a beautiful soul, Crim.
Scribbler :)
10th Apr 2013 7:28pm
thank you dear Scribbler I can feel you have a beautiful soul as well..peace Crim :)
9th Apr 2013 12:15pm
10th Apr 2013 7:29pm
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 1:26pm
My third eye sees and I feel the same vibes you speak of, the same way. I adore this one Crim, gonna have to free some space on my reading list as its full LOL
Peace to you lady :-)
Peace to you lady :-)
10th Apr 2013 7:30pm
9th Apr 2013 7:06pm
"Tasting them and licking each flower from far away
in gigs and bytes riding the psychic flow"
Wow, Crim, this is great work. You've got the delicate balance exactly, between the abstract concept and the internet interactions.
in gigs and bytes riding the psychic flow"
Wow, Crim, this is great work. You've got the delicate balance exactly, between the abstract concept and the internet interactions.
10th Apr 2013 7:31pm
9th Apr 2013 10:56pm
I like your shot of clarity in observation. We engage so many people online and as in our physical world, few risk revealing themselves as they are.
I am drawn in friendship to a myriad of people in diverse lifestyles...yet each, including you, are willing to reveal bits and pieces of themselves through their writing.
I am drawn in friendship to a myriad of people in diverse lifestyles...yet each, including you, are willing to reveal bits and pieces of themselves through their writing.
10th Apr 2013 7:32pm
thank you Ken for getting my poem..I feel such a positive energy from you..thank you..peace Crim :)
