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I missed
I missed.
Yes
Yes I did
I missed
Seeing
You
Like
This.
Seeing you
Crawling
On
Your scraped knees
Beggin
Crying
Trying.
You wanna
Escape?
Really!?
Well
Good
Fucking
Luck.
I will
Will
Find you
I
Will
Torture you
I
Will
Kill
Your
Dreams.
Yes
Yes I did
I missed
Seeing
You
Like
This.
Seeing you
Crawling
On
Your scraped knees
Beggin
Crying
Trying.
You wanna
Escape?
Really!?
Well
Good
Fucking
Luck.
I will
Will
Find you
I
Will
Torture you
I
Will
Kill
Your
Dreams.
Published 2nd Oct 2010
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2nd Oct 2010 10:18pm
This poem is awesome, the transition from gooey 'I miss you' love to 'I dare you to leave(I bought a chainsaw yesterday)'. Totally awesome in all it's psychopathia. :) I want love to be this way, lol. GREAT job.
3rd Oct 2010 5:44pm
I am in love with YOU right now >w<
Thank you so much dear, and lol, I hope you will find that love ;P
4th Oct 2010 5:28am
I can get you. I get uncontrollable grudges. and I make sure she gets the torture.
4th Oct 2010 2:37pm
22nd Dec 2010 9:14am
13th Jan 2012 4:04pm
What the hell?! you pulled me in with this and i must admit it turned me on in way thats not right...;) But the passion is what i felt in this, a man out of control, losing his mind over love...wow, i love this poem:)
17th Jan 2012 8:55pm
You gave me a completely new perspective, on my own poem... Wauw, thank you, that's is pretty awesome... I never looked at it that way, but I like it! SO thank you so much! and also for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed<3
