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mortars

mortars exploding,
fear floods my veins.
this isn't real not yet,
A flare lights up the night sky.
M16A2's sound off it sounds
like its going to hit me.
low cralw to safty and i pass.
is this a sick joke?
My drill seargent shouts at me to move.
I move carefully trying not to cry.
my fear makes me breath fast,
i know i need to slow it down the exits only ten feet away.
I  need to go  i need to make it to the end.
Mortars explode ten feet from me,
I am so scared now, people shout.
I crawl as fast as i can.
I pass the fence.
saftey if only it wors like this in the war.
this was only a test for bct and i passed.
Written by XXbloodroseXX (Blackwolf)
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